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Startime
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0 posted 2000-12-01 03:05 PM


Dream Weaver’s Flight of Angels
Karen Torbiak
2000

It had been an exhausting day
and she just wanted to rest from
all the stress that made her shoulders
ache and her walk drag as she
entered her apartment, throwing
her purse and keys on the sofa

It is an early evening and the sun's
warmth was pouring in her living
room, from the balcony doors,
bringing with it streams of light casting
themselves into sweet patters as
they danced across her floor

She fixed herself a cooling drink
and with a sigh went out to the
balcony, where she could enjoy
the warm breezes of this early
autumn evening and not think
of the office or the amount of work
that would be waiting tomorrow

She sat back in her favorite chair
and placed her drink upon the side
table as she leaned back and closed
her eyes against the glare of the sun
but not realizing how tired she
really was fell, instantly asleep

She opened her eyes to a sensation
of something on her back, not quite
a weight but something that wasn’t
there before and felt somehow alien
and yet it was like the most natural
feeling she had ever experienced

She realized once her eyes were open
that she was standing and that the
world was covered in a blanket of
darkness telling her night had fallen
and all was quiet in her world where
the only sound was that of a cat calling out

Still feeling a strangeness upon her back
reached behind her, then with a sudden
gasp pulled her hand away telling herself
she could not possibly have felt what
her senses had told her she had, still the
feeling of softness was unmistakable

Looking skyward she focused on the
beautiful, perfect blackness above her,
loving the night as she did she looked
up to a clear night sky and took a deep
breath as she marveled at the many
stars now visible and sparkling brightly

Shaking her head she tried, without success,
to rid her mind of what her hand had
encountered, still she knew what she
had felt, so with a nervous wonder
she reached back again only to now
know that she now had wings

Turning away from the night sky she
gazed, with complete shock, at the
reflection of herself in the sliding
doors of her balcony and gasped audibly
as she saw stretched out behind her
the most beautiful pair of angelic wings

Giggling with great delight she came
to the conclusion that this was the most
magnificent of dreams and she was
going to enjoy every minute, for in her
heart she had always dreamed of having
a pair of angel wings to fly the night sky

With the joy of a child discovering the
most wonderful of toys she gazed with
love and wonder at her wings as she
opened and closed them with great ease
as if they responded to her thoughts
rather than anything she could do physically

With another gasp of astonishment she
has finally noticed her image completely
in the glass and quickly became lost
in the vision of what she sees before her,
convincing her more and more that
this has to be the most wonderful dream

Reflected in the glass she sees a vision
of the most beautiful woman, who she
knows to be herself, dressed in a flowing,
red, silk gown, laced through with golden
threads that shimmered as the gentle moonlight
reflected off the delicately woven material

Having lost herself in her reflection she
is startled to hear a noise, like none other,
coming from behind her so with her
heart pounding and holding her breath
she slowly starts to turn around that she may
see what is causing the strange sound

It appears shocks are what this night if filled
with for as she turns around she is met with
the most amazing sight of a man, with angel
wings, flying just above her balcony and
giving her the most beautiful smile from a face
lit up dark eyes sparkling with the joy of life

Reaching his hand to her, he moves closer,
flapping his gigantic wings, with the
greatest ease, as he floats over the rail
and lands, lightly, before her where
he proceeds to take her in his arms and
lay the gentlest of kisses on her lips

Then taking her hand in his and delicately
tracing the lines on her palm, with his
fingertips, he raises it to his lips and
with a sparkle of love in his eyes
brushes it tenderly with his lips, sending
fire up her arm and into her heart

Opening his wings, he motions for her
to do the same and then with great
patience proceeds to teach her how
to use her wings to gently lift herself
from the floor and hover in the air still
safe with the knowledge she is not high

A feeling of exhilaration fills her heart
as she moves her wings with ease and
lifts gracefully off the floor, to seemingly
float in the air beside this incredible, winged
man with the dancing eyes and kisses
that bring a blush of remembrance to her cheeks

Again taking her hand in his, he leads her
further still from the safety of her home
to soar with her into the velvet blackness
of a starlit sky, fulfilling all the dreams
and fantasies she has ever had, and giving
her feeling of the soft night air caressing her

Joy fills her heart and soul as she spends
an eternity, yet only one night, soaring
the heavens with an angel like herself who
looks upon her with a tenderness and care
that she knows is love like no other she has ever
felt for this love flies free from the heart

Seeing the skies begin to grow light
they return to her balcony where he
takes her into his arms and embracing
her with his wings he bends down to
place the most possessive of kisses upon her
lips with the promise of more to come

A feeling of the most complete serenity
flows through her as she rest her head
upon his shoulder and closes her eyes
sighing with pleasure at the peace she feels
only to open her eyes and find herself
alone and still seated in her chair on the balcony

A sigh of deep sadness comes from her very
soul as she realizes it was just a dream and dreams
can never become reality, when suddenly, with
a start of surprise, she see laying upon
the floor of her balcony is a long white feather
bringing a smile to her face as she thinks, maybe they can


Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-01 06:04 PM


You know I loved this amazing story of angels and wishes and dreams coming true....so beautiful!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-12-01 06:08 PM


As I am partial to angels and wings, you knew I would come in to read...a nice story...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-01 11:38 PM


Thank you so much SEA and SUNSHINE. You always make me feel good about the little fantasies I weave. Much love from me to you both.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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4 posted 2000-12-01 11:51 PM


Startime, you are an incredible romantic with an amazing imagination. You need to compile all of these...and may your fantasies all come true  
Startime
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5 posted 2000-12-02 12:01 PM


*sigh* coming from someone as romantic as you are, it is high praise, indeed. Thank you, dear one. Dreams I weave and in the weaving I loose myself in flight among the stars. I love love. It gives me so much joy to see it in others and in the seeing my visions come to keep me company. Much love to you from me, dear one.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2000-12-02 02:25 AM


once again you are hand in hand..I loved this

and I think I will go to sleep now with  this being the golden thread~~~~ to gently weave me a dream to sleep by..thank you  huggzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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7 posted 2000-12-02 05:36 PM


** BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS ...STARTIME !!!**
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Joyce  


"I can live by myself, but not within myself."

Marsha
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8 posted 2000-12-02 07:17 PM


Startime, this is so utterly beautiful, the promise of angels brought me to read and in reading I lost myself, only to discover myself. Oh this is sheer magic, I really love this one. And yes dreams come true, if you have faith they come true.  
Take care
                   Mushy Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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