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0 posted 2000-12-01 10:28 AM





The circle of life
cyclus of new birth and death
related on time


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1 posted 2000-12-01 10:48 AM


lovely...

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2 posted 2000-12-01 11:06 AM


Very nice.


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3 posted 2000-12-01 12:34 PM


Charisma--Wonderful Senryu..nicely done.

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Sunshine....Dragonpoe.....poeminister: thank you for your lovely comment....and taking time to read and reply.  
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5 posted 2000-12-01 04:03 PM


OKAY!

and Amen.


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6 posted 2000-12-01 05:33 PM


Charisma,
This is fabulous, cheers.

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7 posted 2000-12-01 07:31 PM


Interloper: thank you for taking time to read and reply  

Daniel: glad that you like it, thank you for your comment  

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8 posted 2000-12-03 09:12 AM


forgot to make a thread.

  

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9 posted 2000-12-03 11:39 AM


hi, i like your haiku...seems like you are adding a philosophical touch to your work..

thanx for sharing

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10 posted 2000-12-03 10:57 PM


Charisma~
Oh ... this is so pretty.
I love the magic of circles !
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2000-12-04 07:05 AM


Kaile: thank you for your reply, and you are right, it is indeed more philosophic  

Marge: thank you, I am so glad that you like it, its always a pleasure to read your comments.

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