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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-12-01 09:39 AM


I know I don't possess the grace--
I know the words are way beyond,
and God, I cannot know your face -
for wisdom? I can only long...

Accept me in humility-
and if you please? O hear my prayer?
If there is just a gram of good,
then multiply your presence there.

Forgive me now, my false complaints.
Redeem me from myself this day.
If it is true, I've angels sent,
I beg that they will hear me pray.

Pardon my audacity,
assumption of command,
but be it true, I've guardians,
I ask you stay thier hand.

Direct them, please,
to one who needs,
a fair and righteous man.
May they bring
sweet songs to sing
with touch of healing hand.

Let Your light
shine mighty - strong...
May seraphim unite
in song
and Passions join
to sing along
by direct of Your command.

A poet's prayer--
of life aware -
a simple psalm to heal a man.



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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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1 posted 2000-12-01 09:45 AM


Oh my gosh the beauty of this has tears in my eyes. I love it, dear one. It is perfect. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-12-01 09:58 AM


Oh sen this is SOOOO beautiful and SOOO perfect..
and theres nothing "simple" bout it...
yes we all ask for angels to watch over our dear sweet Michael ...
hes so special...
and so are you me twin.. this is such a beautiful prayer poem...
your heart shines in every verse baby...
and touches deep.
big hugs to ya for this one me sweet
love ya muchly
me

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-12-01 10:28 AM


S'en*
From your pen to the wings of angels...this
is beautiful my sweet friend and your heart
and soul and glowing in each perfectly woven
line...Love and hugs~

We love you Michael and you are in our prayers and daily thoughts~


The best and most beautiful things
in the world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt with the heart~
*??*

Martie
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4 posted 2000-12-01 12:38 PM


Serenity--This is perfectly written from your heart and I know that all that listen will hear it.
doreen peri
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5 posted 2000-12-01 12:53 PM


absolutely spiritually beautiful!!!!
this is a prayer.... and will be heard

Saxoness
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6 posted 2000-12-01 02:59 PM


I wanted to close my eyes and pray this with you.  Very touching.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Michael
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7 posted 2000-12-01 05:26 PM


This was beautiful and touching, serenity.  Thank you for such a special poem.  


Michael

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-12-02 03:27 AM


Funny thing about this one...it just sort of fell "through" me. And I was surprised too.
Thank you all, for praying with me.

Michael? Our prayers are indeed with you.
You have touched so many here, and I think that you should know that.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

9 posted 2000-12-02 06:35 AM


My prayers are with you Michael  

Sista, you did really good hon, absolutely beautiful!  

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Nan
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10 posted 2000-12-02 07:35 AM


Amen... This is wonderful, serenity..
vlraynes
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11 posted 2000-12-02 11:50 PM



serenity-
   this is so beautiful..
   what a wonderful, and caring
   write you've penned for Michael..

   Michael...my prayers are with you..

   hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



serenity blaze
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12 posted 2000-12-04 07:20 AM


Maree, Nan and vicky...and a shameless *bump* for Michael today...
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
13 posted 2000-12-04 07:33 AM


I pray with you.....
softly and heartfelt prayer.
excellent penned.

((hugs))
Charisma

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
14 posted 2000-12-04 07:42 AM


S'en excellent write, prayers for Michael coming his way.
Keth


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



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