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Wayoutwalt - Passion's Wing
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Wayoutwalt - Passion's Wing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Who holds a heart that's huge, defined by showing what it is To be generous and so kind Wayoutwalt comes to mind He really knows the biz He hides a heart so sweet so pure by never writing nonsense his wit is rapid, sharp and sure and I'm sure he gives a cure by yuh, yuh, in response His ideals soar, writ for all to see With humor as a weapon And tapestry so rich and free Painted there for you and me a loving touch of heaven He twists the words around him A multi-coloured cape And beauty does surround him Amazes and confounds him As words of life take shape His fills the page with wonder His poetry will soar An echo of treasure to plunder With days of wine and day of thunder Glimpsed through a half closed door Wayoutwalt your softer verse Takes breath away is stilled It has power to avert the curse Sees hope when things are getting worse And promises fulfilled He rides on currents that do sing A twisting, turning dance With words of faith beneath his wing And passionate embrace for everything His poetry sends romance He takes a breath to plummet He then renews his cause For he has reached the summit He tries and he has done it It shows… his poetry soars. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
WOW..he will love this kethry...  love his poetry too~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, this is indeed a WOW for WOW...fits him to a T... you are becoming as adept as Sven at pulling out the fabric of the lives that weave through Passions... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Fantastic Kethry! Described W.O.W. to perfection...now where is Mr. Wow...haven't seen him weaving in a few days!...he needs to take a bow as do you Kethry!The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Grasshopper. . . You're doing these wonderfully!!!! I really liked this one. . . the many sides of WOW!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
hey Keth, thought I'd stop and and say howdy since you always find the time to do so for me. I'm glad I did, this is agood write. It's true what you said, whenever i see Walt's yuh, yuh response, it does make a difference. Thanks for the read< !signature--> "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, WoW are the words I use also to describe him, but that loses something in the translation, hence this poem.  Sunshine, my Saggitarian friend, we of the muse know good stuff when we see it and I see it in Walt. BDC, I will echo that WOW! WOW for him. Sven, From the master's sword to the pupil's pen, I sit at your feet and learn. Live well Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all and blushes to kethry woohoo girl this was great yuh yuh |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Walt wanted me to bump this up. What a stinker, eh? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
WoW, BTTT, for another circle around the dance floor. *wink wink* Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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