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Why Hauku
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Why Hauku |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Penguins look jolly Polar bears frolic in snow Why am I so blue? 12-1-2000 [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a good one...burrrrrr...ha..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Blue from the cold me thinks. This was really good, it made me shiver. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
BBbbbbbrrrrrrr......freezing cold here great one, love it. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Must be cold in here, or up there with Polar Bears, or down there with Penguins By the way, I am told that we are really writing "Senryu" when all lines do not characterise nature ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, yes, when we are in the depths of sadness, why does the world keep smiling? '"Don't they know it's the end of the world? It ended when you said, "Goodbye."' this haiku of yours is fatastically crafted, absolutely! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
VAS has expressed my thoughts perfectly.... i got a surprise when i reached the third line....and i think the surprise you offer makes this even more powerful |
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