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autmn haiku 04 |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
taken by the mist, summer surrenders to fall in the frost-crisp dawn. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're getting pretty darn good at these I'd say.....ethome |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Beki smiles...thank you ethome, did i mention my haiku were first being published 8 years ago? ...would hope I have gotten good by now  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
bumpin up for a few more reads please |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and this faithful reader will leave his work on the thread....;0 loved the phrase "frost-crisp dawn" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I could hear the crunch of the ground as I walk the early light of frosty morning. Much love to you from me. This was beautiful. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful Beki! I too love the last line's frost-crisp Great job! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Beki, Thanks for sharing this delightful view with me, I like your style! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
to Kaile, STartime, VAS and Dennis....Beki curtsies modestly |
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