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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-12-01 02:33 AM


Vague flickers
of my mind
in speak
every solace
that I seek
candle stubs
in melted form -
I love them.
How they flaunt-
conform...

art of practice
what they preach -
the ever-yearning
flame of stretch..
and strife of all
that's not found yet -
confirmation...
disbelief.

A hope in burn,
a fire dance
shadow's play
the darkness trance
solitaire -
sweet romance--
deck in stack
of sweet relief...

Oh brush my tears,
as if, you'd heard.
sanctify
my every word...
whisper to me
love absurd,

oh hold me...still...
my shivers...
fear.


© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-01 05:01 AM


I love it ...love absurd... if I could get there I'd take those Louisiana shivers out of your soul....and take away that fear until it was...well....love absurd...yeah I would!! You're on a roll there Serenity keep'em comin...ethome
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-12-01 08:17 AM


A hope in burn,
a fire dance
shadow's play
the darkness trance
solitaire -
sweet romance--
deck in stack
of sweet relief...

Oh brush my tears,
as if, you'd heard.
sanctify
my every word...
whisper to me
love absurd,

oh hold me...still...
my shivers...
fear.
=================
its never absurb if we need it ....
this is soooo YOU.. me candle dancing sweet
I do so love when you emote in this style..
with such grace ....


"candle stubs
in melted form -
I love them.
How they flaunt-
conform..."

how cool is that verse...
way cool..like the poet that wrote it  
me loves ya me sweet ...muchly
me


Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-12-01 08:54 AM


Hmm..tried to pick a favorite line..couldn't..I love them all...and isn't love absurd? LOL
catalinamoon
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Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-12-01 09:18 PM


Stunning, beautiful. The form was great, too, kind of grabbed you and pulled you along. Loved everything about this.
Sandra

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-12-02 01:46 AM


Hey You!!!!
this is greattttt!

Love absurd? Indeed!

Maree  

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
6 posted 2000-12-02 02:08 AM


Very nice Serenity.
Althought absurd is a bit of an understatement for the word love.
Rich

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-12-02 12:49 PM


I'll agree with that. . .

Contradiction also. . .

excellent. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-12-02 06:05 PM


Thanks to all for the sweet replies...and love absurd?  Lawd, ain't it the truth? lol...and ethome? it WAS a bit chilly in here today...until I read that heart warming reply...thanks much!!!
Balladeer
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
9 posted 2000-12-02 06:12 PM


I majored In "love absurd" in college...can I play, too?  


As always, I love the style....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
10 posted 2000-12-02 06:52 PM


A hope in burn,
a fire dance
shadow's play
the darkness trance
solitaire -
sweet romance--
deck in stack
of sweet relief...

Oh brush my tears,
as if, you'd heard.
sanctify
my every word...
whisper to me
love absurd,

Loved it...all of it and will save it  for another day...to make me smile and remind me how absurd life can be

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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