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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-30 10:31 PM


all                                                                                              she
     she                                                                              didn’t
           was                                                                think
                  looking                                             she
                              for                             would
                                   was               find
                                          a         a
                                             love
                                          a         a
                                   love              love
                             that                            that
                    she’d                                        would
                sought                                       last                                          
                      for                                           for
                           her                               her
                                entire           entire
                                         u  life   u
                                      t     b   b     t
                                     i                    i
                                   n                      n
                                   t                       t
                                    h                    h
                                      e                 e
                                        e              e
                                          n           n
                                             d      d
                                               they
                                              found
                                               each
                                               other

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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ethome
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1 posted 2000-12-01 05:40 AM


Clever Sven!! love the format! I'm so glad you got to writing about Amy because she is a real sweet poet lady...I really enjoy her posts so much and thanks for sharing this happiness info about her...well done my friend!!
Marsha
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2 posted 2000-12-01 05:47 AM


Sven, this is utterly wonderful, a really great format for a superb poet. Well done loud applause, and then I'll start jumping about again. (I really need to cut down on this coffee   )
Take care
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-12-01 05:58 AM


This is so lovely Sven! What a beautiful tribute to our dear Amy. She is such a treasure, so full of love and her poems so overflowing with genuine expression. Another wonderful addition to your ever-growing Gallery!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-12-01 07:14 AM


Sven,
Butterfly kisses for this one. Soft sigh!
Write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Charisma
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5 posted 2000-12-01 08:05 AM


another wonderful tribute for a wonderful poet, and you put it in an amazing form.....

love it Sven.

((hugs))
Charisma

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6 posted 2000-12-01 08:53 AM


Beautiful.  
Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-12-01 08:55 AM


Whoa! Wow!  Amy, get yourself in here and look at this!  Wheee!!!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
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8 posted 2000-12-01 10:09 AM


Very cool Sven-gator...
and yes...Amys poetry is so full of her love, hopes and dreams ...
she makes us all want to root for her  

very creative way to honor her...well done
jm

Startime
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9 posted 2000-12-01 10:11 AM


YES!!!<,YES!!!another one. Oh how simply delightful. I love the way you did this, it is magnificent. I am so very glad they found each other. There is nothing so precious as finding love. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


CocoBaci
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10 posted 2000-12-01 10:42 AM




Sven, this is so creative and beautiful...

Just wrap this up in a satin bow it's great!

I'm sure our sweet Aimster will indeed adore this poem you've penned

   Coco




[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-01-2000).]

Victoria
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11 posted 2000-12-01 10:44 AM


very creative..almost looks like amy is doing a headstand haa...

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
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12 posted 2000-12-01 11:07 AM


Very crafty!! This was greatly enjoyable!


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Aimster
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Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
13 posted 2000-12-01 11:12 AM


Sven--

Number one, let me humbly apologize for
taking so long to respond to this. I have
been crazy with work etc. I want you to
know that not only am I speechless but I
have tears in my eyes! This is so very
beautiful. You are an exceptional poet
with a huge heart. Ever since coming to
Passions, you have been one of my favs.
I don't know what to really say about this
because it's just the sweetest thing. Just
please know both Laura and I are very very
honored that you would dedicate something
like this to us. Your entire Passions
Gallery is something very amazing and
beautiful. I will speak for this entire
"family" and say you are a major asset and
jewel. This place would not be the same
without your grace or talent. Thank you
my dear friend.

Love,
~amy~

Sven
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14 posted 2000-12-01 12:38 PM


ethome, thank you my friend. . . she is indeed a wonderful poet and person. . .

Marsha, share a cup with me?     Glad that you enjoyed. . .

Kit, treasure, yes. . . that's a word that fits her pefectly. . .  

Kethry, thank you my friend. . .  

Charisma, thank you for reading. . . glad that you liked. . .

deVine, thank you!!!  

Sunshine,    I think that she got in here pretty quick on her own. . . lol

JM, yes, she's always touched me with her heart. . . thank you. . .  

Startime,    Have I mentioned how much I love seeing your responses??  Thank you for them!!!!

Coco, my thoughts exactly!  Thank you my friend. . .

Victoria, that's one way of looking at it. . . cool!!  Thank you!!!

dragonpoe, thank you. . .  

Amy, my friend. . . since you've been here, I have always enjoyed you and your words.  Spoken from the heart with a voice that rang true.  You have always touched me with the honesty and warmth of your poems, and moved me many times.  It is my highest hope that you and Laura will have a wonderful life.  Full of joy, happiness, and love. . . you deserve it. . . thank you again my friend. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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