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Heart of Snow (Senryu)
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Heart of Snow (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Heart of Snow Her love is Winter, So soft is her heart of snow, I am a snowman [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful...I enjoy seeing snowmen...never built one, but someone made one at my school today and it was so nice to see. Good work. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poeminister, Nice write, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cool senryu! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed..you have an unique way of putting things across, Poeminister  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sighing and giggling* it is amazing that I was able to see the melting of romance in your wonderful lines. This was great. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this was very cute.....love it snowman. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
In a heart of snow...the perfect form to take would be that of a snowman...this was excellent! The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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