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Decembrrrrrrs' Wind Haiku
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Decembrrrrrrs' Wind Haiku |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Decembrrrrrrs' cold wind Delivers Arctic greetings The wind chime shivers 11-30-2000 |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brrrrrrr........this reminds me I need to get a fire built soon tonight...very nicely done!  -SEA |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, I agree with SEA. I have a fire burning and it feels warm and cosy but outside is cold and dark. Well done and very easy to feel. Thank you so much for the read. Much love from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
brrrrrr...very good, Dennis! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like the title...and the poem is very descriptive of December. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Dennis, Reaching out for the heater. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You have described it perfectly, Dennis. May you find a fire to keep you warm. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Leave it to You to come up with this characteristicly humorous & insightful Chiller! You do excell in these. I tip my hat-but my head might get cold. Good going, David To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- brrrrrr...i think the temp. in Phoenix just dropped about 20 degrees.. where's my jacket? lol thanks for the chill.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Brrrrrrrrrr ! is right ! Don't want that kinda 'chillku'. Nicely done - as usual, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Brrrr! I think the Arctic sent its greetings early this year! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
wonderful...and I love the last line...wind chimes like icicles breaking...tinkling... Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
yeah this is a cold one especially if you live where I do...well done!...sure got the point across!! ethome |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very vivid! Excellently said! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
like Elizabeth, i think the title was sooo creatively done....admire your sense of humour as always [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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