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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-11-30 06:37 PM



Kethry The Smile Giver

She writes poetry that is so full of life and it's real
For her poetry is packed with enjoyment and zeal
Each time she writes I think oh my how great is this
And I send her back a sisterly and poetic kiss
She never fails to make my day
She has so much she wants to say
Her words cascade out in a fabulous stream
I must admit that I think her poetry is a dream

She is fantastic when she writes her comic ones
She is so clever with her poetic and very apt puns
Each one I read I devour with poetic avid greed
Towards laughter and joy skillfully me she'll lead
This poem is just for the fun of it
And anyway I owe her quite a bit
Her words have been there fulfilling my need
Kethry my friend the planter of beauties seed


Slushy Mushy
Thank You
  


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-30-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-30 06:45 PM


Mushy~ sweetie, I can hear your heartbeat clear over here!! This is so very sweet...she's sure to love this   -SEA
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-11-30 07:26 PM


This place is just busting out with love
this is a perfect tribute to our Kethry...
poet of vision and insight.
very well done Marsha .. not mushy ... very sweet
love those last 2 lines...they are perfect
take care
jm

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Startime
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3 posted 2000-11-30 07:34 PM


Oh yes, more, more. This is so wonderful for the heart. I love your talent and when you write a dedication such as this your love just pours out and embraces all. Thank you so much for being you. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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4 posted 2000-11-30 11:03 PM


BRAVO!!!   BRAVO!!!!

Indeed she has given many smiles. . . and this gives me one for her!!

Wonderful O Slushy one!!!  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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5 posted 2000-12-01 12:46 PM


Marsha, ya got that rite lady

'KETHRY' is a gem of a sweetie and a dear PoetFriend to all who embrace her poetic rhymes and her tender heart...

Great write MushySlushyMarsha
  Coco



[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-01-2000).]

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6 posted 2000-12-01 12:54 PM


Marsha~
A smile lights the face of one friend -
and shines to light up another -
Thanks for this lovely render of our Kethry friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2000-12-01 01:46 AM


Yep she is a gem and who better to write about her than you dear one

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



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8 posted 2000-12-01 05:23 AM


Circe, thanks sweetie, I hope she does indeed enjoy it. She does deserve this one, she really does. So thanks truly
                   
Janet Marie, you are too kind, but to be honest this was really in part payment for a debt. But you're right Passions does overflow with love and affection doesn't it. And I did promise, and I try to always remember my promises. Unless it's to my sisters then I always cross my fingers.  
                  
Startime, thank you most sincerely, we are all a very warm hearted and loving crop of poets here.    
                
Sir Sven, thank you very muchly, she does doesn't she, and I'm pleased that it gave you one too.  
                  
CoCo, thank you, thank you, she is very special. I'm pleased you like this one.
                     
Marge, it does and they are such perfect poetic smiles too. Don't you just love this place, I love everyone of you all here, I truly do. But as I said in another reply I really owed her this one.   Thanks Marge girl, and thanks for the smiles you've given too.         
                  
Paula, thanks love, now you just watch out, I might just make you the maiden in my next knight tale. No I wouldn't though, I shall think of something to fit I know. Because although you'd make a great maiden, I'm sure you deserve a happy ever after, and my maidens aren't guaranteed that.    
I'll come up with something I know I will.  

Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                    
and as Kethry always says be well and write on  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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9 posted 2000-12-01 07:10 AM


Mushy,
If this is what I get for forgiving you, can I do it in advance seventy times seven. This is so wonderful so overwhelming soo soo excellent.

SEA, I DO LOVE IT! I DO! What a surprise!

Janet, that you should say that about me, I'm stunned. Thank you forever.

Startime, I think I may be having a love attack.

Sven, that you the master should give a BRAVO... I have no words that's twice you've left me speechless.

CocoBaci,
I'm honoured. Thank you

Marge,
When you render it gifts the sender, thank you

Paula,  and you are a treasure, thank you.

Write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Marsha
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10 posted 2000-12-01 09:18 AM


Kethry, glad you liked it love, this is for you from me with love and affection. And because I owed you, I still do of course but since I have no chance of paying the debt I'll have to owe you still. I'm not sure you know how much I love your work. (Well maybe you have a little hint   I can't do subtle, but then everyone here knows that) I'm just naturally exuberant,( my sisters call it noisy.   As if moi!! Never
Take care
            Slushy Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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11 posted 2000-12-01 09:38 AM


A true compatriot she has found in you...smile on...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Marsha
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12 posted 2000-12-01 01:03 PM


Kari, thank you kid  , and I owe you one too I know I do. And as soon as I come up with something perfect I will post it. Glad you like this one love, I truly am.
Take care
              Majestic Marsha
                      
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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13 posted 2000-12-01 03:04 PM


Magik Marsha,

You ARE the smiles fairy


Rite on
Keth


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Marsha
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14 posted 2000-12-01 05:20 PM


Kethry love, how do you do that. i know I'm thick, how long have I been on these pages, ages I know. I'm ashamed to admit it but i only found out how to put the other images on the poem. I thought you had to type it all out, which I have done, but it takes ages. So tell me, how it's done pretty please. And she is a wonderful fairy. Thank you kindly.
Take care
            Slushy Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Charisma
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15 posted 2000-12-01 05:26 PM


Marsha you chose the right words for this fantastic tribute.
love it very much....

((hugs))
Charisma

Marsha
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16 posted 2000-12-02 05:34 AM


Charisma, thanks sweet, I do appreciate it you know I do
take care
                     Mushy Marsha
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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17 posted 2000-12-06 04:39 AM


Hey there little miss MM   this is a fantastic tribute to Kethry...great job
See ya
~HUG~
TRacie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marsha
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18 posted 2000-12-06 07:57 AM


Tracie, thank you very muchly, as I've said I did owe her this, but then I always will. And even though she would say there is no debt between friends, there is and I owe her. And she desevers the tribute too.  
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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