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Ladycat
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0 posted 2000-11-30 06:24 PM


I want to love
I want to love like in the fairy tales
All those wonderful fairy tales
The ones that my mother use to read to me
Sitting there so young and innocent

I wanted to be the one
The one to find the prince
The one to be the damsel
I wanted that love
I wanted that fairy tale love

I wanted someone to sweep me away
To wake me with a kiss
To caress my face
To kiss my brow
I want that kind of love
That fairy tale love

That love that doesn't seem to exsist
I want to have the man on the horse carry me away
Far away into the sunset
I want to live happily ever after
I want that special love that you can only get in dreams
I want that fairy tale love

I want to open a book one day and it is about me and my lover
The Knight in shining armor is mine
The castle on the hill is ours
The feeling of never losing is there
I want that love
I want that fairy tale love

I want to feel that everything is perfect
Just once in life
I want to live in faith flying to the wind
No worries
No hurt
No anger

Just once
Just once
I want that love
I want that fairy tale love

Can you help me find it?

Love,
Ladycat


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-30 07:11 PM


If I could,I swear I would.......I wish that for you   -SEA
ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-30 07:17 PM


I can help you find it in the beauty of your words and in the depths of your imagination. The desires in your mind paints pictures of the love scenes...and from there anything's possible..... hold on to those thoughts you might need them someday.... good work I really enjoyed it...take care...ethome
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3 posted 2000-11-30 07:27 PM


*sigh* this poem is filled with the deep yearning of having love in your life. This is a feeling I too understand for the heart of this romantic ever searches for a man who can dream with me. *sigh* Yes, I understand your yearning, dear one, and pray your heart is filled someday as you lay in quiet serenity within the arms of a man who loves you. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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4 posted 2000-12-01 09:32 PM


I want all those things too, I am so afraid it is impossible. But that little bit of hope hangs on, (like the yellow cat fur on my black clothes-representative of something good, yet causing all kinds of trouble)
I wrote a poem some time ago, on this same theme. I think Disney hurt us in ways we can never prove. Cause no one ever quite matches up to the hopes we had. Sigh..and sigh..
Well I'm glad to know there is another lonely princess out there thinking like this, do you think someday yet we may be rescued?
Well, after digressing that much, let me say, I liked your poem a lot!
Sandra

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5 posted 2000-12-02 04:35 AM


Thank you all so much for reading this..

SEA,
Thank you so much fdr that wish for me to find Mr. Right.  I'll just have to keep looking.  

ethome- Thank you for the wonderful thought.  I never knew that my words could be so moving.  I will hold true to my words, thoughts and dreams and know that anything is possible.

Startime- I hope that your quest ends up better than mine.  Where ever love like that is it will fall in my lap and I'm sure of that.  I just hope the same happens to you.

Catalinamoon- One day we will both be swep off of our feet.  That Knight in Shining Armor will ride through the woods and save me from the dragon.  I still have hope in that. You keep the hope in that too.

Thank you all again.

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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