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Startime
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0 posted 2000-11-30 05:03 PM


Whisper
Karen Torbiak
2000

Yes
hear it
so gentle
small caress
touches my soul
makes my heart sing
fills my night with dreams
gives flight to all my fantasies
sets passion's heat flowing
starts my heart beating
lips parted, sighing
sweetly spoken
softest touch
Whisper
I Love
You



Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-11-30 05:13 PM


so much spoken sweetly in a whisper ...
and presented in such a lovely form
wonderfully done
take care
jm

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

mutington
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since 2000-11-29
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2 posted 2000-11-30 05:33 PM


**Soft as a 'whisper'..another 'gem' from you!!!**
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

mutington (Joyce)  

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2000-11-30 05:37 PM


LOOK!  A beautiful Christmas tree ornament for somebody special!

*sigh*


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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4 posted 2000-11-30 05:53 PM


Enjoyed the read!!!!!!!!
Mon Cherie
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5 posted 2001-11-03 09:31 AM


I think this is SO beautifully written!! As gently written as each whispered word. ^.^
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