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For the Romantics, a sigh haiku
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For the Romantics, a sigh haiku |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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genuine surprise greets thee, morning light, come bright love trips, beckoning tender, sweet, caress heartstrings flutter by on song love then again comes beat once more my heart still, still, it’s been still too long palpitates in pain you came into view lonesome been for sigh of you romance comes again stay here within sight never again to wander sing the song of sigh Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ahhhhhh, yes, so beautiful  *sigh* enjoyed these VERY much! -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So you too can be a hopeless romantic when you want Karilea....and this is a wonderful example of it....really very nicely done arrangements each of them like beautiful word bouquets.....keep'em comin ....Sunshine came softly through my window today.....ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, You're right sometimes there are any words, this is one amazing stunnigly beautiful poem.  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Upon lips crimson rests the beauty of the heart riding on a sigh ~~*~~ Passion of romance dwelling within the reaches on the sigh of lips A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*SIGH* love knocks on my door sweet romance flow from within how I love to sigh love it....great sigh. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i couldn't wait to get from one haiku to the next o yuh!! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*Sigh*...such romantic words.... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Listen, bluebirds, hear Copper wire perch carries love From my lips to hers. These are beautiful, sunshine...sighs are in order |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I just had to give it a try. I am not even sure if it is right but this love is so beautiful. You so inspire this heart of mine. Much love to you from me. lips touch gentle lips softly opening to love tender sweet they share Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tender, sweet, caress heartstrings flutter by on song love then again comes you came into view lonesome been for sigh of you romance comes again stay here within sight never again to wander sing the song of sigh ================ Haiku/Senyru suits you well  these are perfect in their imagery and impact very cool collection later-make-me-sigh-gator Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
genuine surprise greets thee, morning light, come bright love trips, beckoning ========================================= Your Senryus are no surprise, just wonderful. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
These are so soft and delicate...like the air of the sigh themselves...the second one is my favorite but they all go together so very well...beautiful writing~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh.....what a beautiful song!! Well done....well done indeed! On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* This Romantic sings praises. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
soft sweet tears of joy's reprise in the morn she'll soar thank you all... < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Karilea~ Oh, such lovely *sighku* from you. My favorite - my favorite !!!! 'you came into view lonesome been for sigh of you romance comes again' Oh ..... I LOVE IT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, my friend....thank you sigh much.....{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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