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It Was Just A Kiss
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It Was Just A Kiss |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It was just a kiss how could it leave me so weak pulse racing, nerves tingling completely unable to speak It was just a kiss but I felt my whole universe shift my world ~ my life changed forever an unmoving river ~ suddenly swift It was just a kiss yet I saw stars collide heard the ocean sing with each turn of the tide It was just a kiss following the words "I do" and in that kiss I gave myself to you. ~SEA~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now it isn't a wonder you are so much in love if he can inspire such a beautiful verse such as this from you. BTW...I have learned that there is no such thing as "Just A Kiss". You really shine in your love for him in this one. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, how fabulous is this utterly wonderful. Yes you knew I'd say that and this, I love this one.  Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a simple kiss but more powerful to ignite the emotions than anything else.*sigh* to be kissed from someone who loves you must be an incredible experience. Wonderful and dreamy was this poem. Thank you so much, dear one. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You are blessed to know this pleasure and the sensuality found within a kiss...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah yes... THAT kind of kiss... *sigh*.. what a wonderful feeling this one brings to life..very nice poem!  hugs, g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
What a wonderful way to capture one of life's most precious moments...lovely. Best |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
SEA: this one is penned with so many love, I'm glad to see you so happy. excellent write my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
with lips so devine ... tis a kiss to last for all of time very cool poem Sea-gator... soooo romantic and sweet the way you tied the kiss in with the devotion of "I do" love this one ... later-lip-lock-gator jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ no, there really isn't such a thing as "just a kiss", especially with my husband...  sometimes throughout my day, I'll get a goofy grin on my face, thinking of his kisses...... Marsha~ so glad you liked this one Startime~ thank you James~ oh yesDg~ thank you very much! Best~ thanks Charisma~ yes, very happy, my husband is a dream come true Janet~  I'm so happy you liked this one, thank you very much! -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this. I'm speechless. Fabulous! AUTHOR, AUTHOR! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~  thank you, so sweet! -SEA |
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