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Open Poetry #11

Cold November

Words_of_Glitter
Member

since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

0 posted 2000-11-30 02:07 PM

I can't feel anything anymore
My heart is numb
You froze it with your harsh, cold words
And you can apologize until your breath runs out
And your face turns as blue as my heart
But it won't unfreeze me
Or melt the iceblocks in the igloo
That I built around my heart

"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2000-11-30 02:19 PM

So sad a piece you shared and wrote, I have felt like this myself for a time. Hugs to you, and wishing you happiness.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2000-11-30 02:20 PM

Very precisely said with a relatable theme! I really like this poem, but hope that it is not based on a personal situation, hugs!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-11-30 02:21 PM

I'm hoping the sun shines on your heart soon....this is so sad, but expressed very well

-SEA

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