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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Desperation By : ParisGrl How much longer will you wait for me? I can't take this much more, you see. One thousand miles separates us, but with one kiss you stole my heart I knew then that we would never part I can't go on much longer though, being apart from you rips holes in my soul and heart I'm at my ropes end, I don't know what to do I can't stand the thought of being away from you On that fateful day when you stole my heart away I knew one thing for sure, I would wait forever for you And that's all I will say |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you two will be together again soon, waiting forever is too long  -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Heart felt work....I know the one you love will wait as long as it takes just as you will...all things meant to be happen in time...may you be together soon~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your emotions are beautifully and tenderly expressed... desperation kissed with devotion ... very well written love like this is worth waiting for  take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I'm sorry but i don't have the time to reply to each of you but I wanted to thank you for responding to a poem that is very dear to my heart......Don't worry Janet, i'll wait.  )Thanks Again, Laura |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Laura-- well darlin' my answer is quite simple... for you I'd wait FOREVER!! on that fateful day you stole my heart too i've never known a love that was more true so forever and a day i'd wait for you my love knowing that ours was devised from the Lord above. I love you! Love, ~me~ |
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