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The True Of Salt For Elizabeth whom we all love
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The True Of Salt For Elizabeth whom we all love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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For Elizabeth whom we all love. The True Of Salt We are conceived of the salt of the sea That I believe our default and decree. And when one of our loved ones say us goodby We cry a salt tear from the source in our eye. We offer salute from the common salt sea The source of our being for you and for me. For there are no words that can say goodbye Except from the salt of a tear in your eye. God bless and keep your salt that it stay And only leave through a tear of a day. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent Seymour!! very well written and comforting.....ethome |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--What a wonderful thought...and a beautiful poem! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this was written with gentle sensitivity. Thank you so very much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Quite beautiful, sy...what a thoughtful and gentle poet you are! This is full of love and grace. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, you will always pen the perfect feeling... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
God bless and keep your salt that it stay And only leave through a tear of a day. ================ yes, we all love our dear Elizabeth ... and your poetry as well. thank you for this gift of a tear. jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The lovely thoughts from your pen - fall on such a loving audience. Thank you for your gift of gentle caring. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Martie, Startime, Serinity, Sunshine, JM, And Marge. Thank you for your wonderful and sincere response. Sy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is very beautiful and loving and just so perfect for our Lady Liz |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful thoughts, Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Paula Finn and Elizabeth. Thank you all so much for the read. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts indeed, this was a heartfelt poem, penned with love and care. thank you for sharing this one. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, THank you for the read and comment. |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen. Michael |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely, Sy. Amen.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Sy, This is a beautiful poem, and I thank you with a tear in my eye. Love Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, exactly my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, this is just so tender and beautiful...  Coco |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, Amen and thank you. Balladeer, And you for absolutely. Elizabeth, I wait for the wake of your wonderful pen For the time you will begin again. Love Sy Sven, Thank you for exactly. Coco, Thank you for the tender beautiful. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sy* What a beautiful heart you have...and to share it with a beautiful friend. Love to you both during this very difficult time...Thank God for friends like you Sy I know Elizabeth finds much comfort in your words~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Butterfly, What could be nicer then a butterflies sweep O'er a poem that has drifted to final sleep. Thank you my friend. Sy |
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