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SEA
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0 posted 2000-11-30 09:14 AM



Greeting the morning
friendly Sunshine a constant
Warming hearts each day
~*~
Sunshine showers us
with kisses so sweet and soft
Freckles left in place
~*~
Sunshine loves gently
warm words to comfort and heal
we all love her back
~*~

~SEA~

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2000-11-30 09:18 AM


What a tribute!  Well done, my friend.

jwesley

Startime
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2 posted 2000-11-30 09:32 AM


How very delightful. You did a beautiful job for a wonderful lady. Thank you so much. I am so happy to start my day with so much sunshine.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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3 posted 2000-11-30 09:39 AM


Well done Sea well done!!
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4 posted 2000-11-30 09:48 AM


circe, this is amazingly wonderfully and beautifully written. I admire these so much, I can't do them, I really can't, but I love them. Absolutely fabulous love, I love this I truly honestly do. And You KNEW I would  
take care
            Mushy
              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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5 posted 2000-11-30 09:54 AM


wonderful done SEA....lovely tribute.
penned with grace my friend

(hugs)
Charisma

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6 posted 2000-11-30 10:42 AM


JWesley~ thank you  

Startime~ starting your day with Sunshine is a wonderful thing!  

Ethome~   glad you liked these  

Marsha~ yes you can, just try! Thanks sweetie....

Charisma~ thank you so much  

-SEA

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7 posted 2000-11-30 10:45 AM


Very heartwarming.And in a difficult form too.Well done.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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8 posted 2000-11-30 11:15 AM


you sure learn fast...these senryus are very enjoyable....

waiting for you to stretch more poetic wings....try a tanka(5-7-5-7-7 syllable count) some time, will you

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9 posted 2000-11-30 11:23 AM


Tony~ thank you  

Kaile~ Senryu, Senryu.....I keep getting them confused......agh! Ok I will try a Tanka tonight, just for you ok? Wish me luck... thank you  

-SEA

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10 posted 2000-11-30 11:24 AM


An honor, I smile
for Kaile I shall try now
and to honor SEA
how you both make soft smiles sweet
and my day is now complete

Thank you ladies, thank you everyone...

Sun is
BEAMING





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11 posted 2000-11-30 11:27 AM


Sunshine~ Look! You made a Tanka!! Very cool! Now I will definately have to try this!   -SEA
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12 posted 2000-11-30 05:35 PM


You gals are just too good for words.

Amen.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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13 posted 2000-11-30 10:54 PM


I just had to sneak back in to get a smile before I fade away...

thank you again SEA...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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