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Echo of a Poet's Voice |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Echo: (Greek Mythology) A nymph whose unrequited love for Narcissus caused her to pine away until nothing but her voice remained The echo of this poet’s voice lingers deep in wooded glen Words of love, of hope, of joy foretell what would have been Silenced by the love not taken she wipes her teary cheeks Afraid to sing the name of love to name the one she seeks If unsaid words could echo would love shine upon his face Or would she see him turn away deny her heart’s loving grace We will never know the truth from the one she would adore Only the echo of her heart is heard because the poet speaks no more [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
oh my gosh!!! thia is incredibly beautiful!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks for the lesson on the word echo! But more than that, THANK YOU for sharing this fabulous poem! It was a wonderful read! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So very sad...to never take the chance...to never speak his name...til not even the echo remains |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
What a beautiful poem Sharon  and yes thanks for the lesson on Echo. I especially loved these lines ....... We will never know the truth from the one she would adore Only the echo of her heart is heard because the poet speaks no more sad, but beautiful! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you my friends for your kind words. I was working on another poem and search for something to fit that...I came across this definition and something clicked. I'm glad you like this..it's got a very special meaning for me.  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
reading your posts is NEVER a disapointment - unrequited love is never satisfying - it almost gives lie to the concept that "it is better to have loved and lost..." I hope you find a better object for your very worthy attention ~sigh~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
PdV...very beautifully woven tale here my fiiend, not just of Echo but a tale of love through all time. Like it? I should say so. jwesley |
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Cperazzi Junior Member
since 1999-12-13
Posts 34Texas |
This one truly hit home for me...I have only posted 1 of my poems here because that was the last time I wrote. When he was gone, so were the words. I keep coming back, drawn to the beauty of what I can read...if no longer write. You have spoken eloquently what I feel...thank you. Cindi |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiling over here. I love the mythology, as you know...your talent continually amazes me. (And your web site is quite a wonderful read!) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,Loved it!!!!! |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This is truly wonderful. I know how it is to sing until there's nothing left. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: How well I can relate to this... |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
** SADLY BEAUTIFUL!!!** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington(Joyce) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Sharon! Sad yet beautiful! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
PdV, Loved this one!! But, you know, a chance not taken is lost forever . . . LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
deVine one, this is really good. Yes, I know about Echo, being a big devotee of mythology. What an excellent topic to use for a poem...and you did it just right! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is great deVine. . . Sometimes, the echoes haunt us forever. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ This is a lovely render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you live up to your name...DEVINE...love it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PDV, this is so touching.. An excellent write PoetLady Coco |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Only the echo of her heart is heard because the poet speaks no more very very lovely Sharon ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- this is absolutely beautiful, my friend. enjoyed it very much.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice Sharon... Perhaps the Echo would better resound upon a mountain side.. It's a voice that certainly would be heard if not in wooded glen... Nice poetry, my friend..  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wonderfully vivid writing, sharon well done! |
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