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JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2000-11-30 12:32 PM


I can see within her the sparkles
the time yet to pass
a simple unguarded smile
provoked to laughter by monkeys

a child is a combination
of dreams and hard work
of realization and acceptance
of a love greater than your own

every moment spent
is never enough
for a father
who loves his little girl

goodnight Isabelle




A real man

kisses his children goodnight

© Copyright 2000 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-11-30 12:41 PM


This is just perfect...and yes a real man does kiss his kids goodnight no matter how old they are

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
2 posted 2000-11-30 12:55 PM


thank you Paula my pen name was simply Jbowie before- been a member since 99 when NAN came and rescued me from a place called the pit
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-12-11 01:15 PM


This is filled with love and devotion....it should go 'round again!



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-12-11 02:02 PM


Liked the style and softness...James
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2000-12-11 02:08 PM


Beautiful *sigh* how wonderful is the love of a father. This is so sweet and tender. I loved it. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
6 posted 2000-12-11 02:20 PM


How wonderful...Nothing quite as special as seeing the smile of a child...Lucky Isabelle, to have such a sweet father...  
Loved it...  ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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