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Open Poetry #11

But Not Your Lies

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-11-29 08:40 PM

But Not Your Lies

I can see it
in your eyes,
what you tried
to hide,
but it's over...
no need to lie,
any more.
Yes I'll be gone
when you wake up,
gone with the sunrise.
I could see
in your eyes,
even tonight
when you loved me,
you lied.
I'll search
and I'll search,
but know I'll never find
a love like you;
but I've got to go...
loving you,
remembering you,
missing you,
but not your lies.

w. james beard, jr.
© November 2000

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-29-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-11-29 08:43 PM

~Hey J,...so true about the eyes, you can tell huh? Always! Great write, so true, so painful. Take care you. *Peace.

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2000-11-30 02:32 PM

Hey, a darker piece coming from you? yea, well it still holds that softness, and in this piece, makes it more moving. Really shows the hurt of the subject, who knows what he has to do, but fights the pain of the truth.
Well done.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2000-11-30 03:49 PM

great write, loved and enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

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