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Interloping Interludes Haiku for Many
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Interloping Interludes Haiku for Many |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Interloping Interludes Haiku for Many ~*~ the compliment lies in the pledge of kind seen in the comment given ~*~ interloping thoughts interludes sifting softly thought weaves lead to pen ~*~ wafting quiet softness owl's feathers shift the dark air someone has come home ~*~ angels took a love hands will now circle hearts loss loving angels come ~*~ in the hug of day embraces kindly filled souls thoughtfulness of mind ~*~ sun shall set this day having cast rainbows all 'round hearts see tomorrow Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-How could I have missed this?, it was very lovely. I especially liked your words of "interloping thoughts" and "interludes sifting softly". |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was beautiful, my friend! Saw, felt and heard every word...inside. Thank you for sharing. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful haiku, Sunshine. In a way, I think it is a reflection of the people here at Passions. They are all warm caring individuals. I am proud to post here among them.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
sun casts rainbows all around.....I agree  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ these are beautiful and heartfelt -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Karilea, each and every one ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gemini, I don't think you ever miss a thing...thank you... James, inside is exactly where I had hoped you would see, feel, know...thank you... LoneWolf, your thoughts are correct....aren't we so very, very fortunate?...thank you... 'Deer...I have a little help from my friends...thank you...{~,^} Thank you SEA...I don't know how to not write from my heart... Sven, thank you... Kit, I know you are busy, thanks for taking a moment to relax... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I like it VERY much. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
An Angel you are from heaven showing and showering us with the gentle sweetness of love. Much love to you from me, dear one. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper, I like having you come in to read very much...thank you... Startime...hardly, but I am a very fortunate woman who found a wonderful venue in which sharing becomes yet another Passion...thank you for your kind words... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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