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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2000-11-29 06:45 PM



Loving You Is Not Easy.

Everyday and in every way
I love you more than ever
Seeking comfort that will stay
Releasing my heart from pain

The flower I bring to you
Is white and as pure
As the tenderness of your sleep
Dream on now my love dream deep
Into the memories we shared

Loving you is not easy
I cannot hold you in my arms
Words I speak I can only convey
To the sounds of birds
And whispers of the winds

Loving you is not easy
Since you went away
On Heaven's journey
Comfort I get knowing
That paradise for you glows
Strength I need to end the sorrows

~~Daniel J D~~


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-29 07:50 PM


This is so touching, Daniel. Very nice.

Denise

Daniel J D
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2 posted 2000-11-29 08:08 PM


ds,
Losing a very dear family member is so sad and takes such a long time to get over.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

jwesley
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3 posted 2000-11-29 08:11 PM


Very touching and VERY well written.

jwesley

Daniel J D
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4 posted 2000-11-29 08:54 PM


jwesley,
Thank you, your words are very comforting.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Startime
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5 posted 2000-11-29 08:59 PM


How very sad is this poem of you. My heart hurts for your lose, dear one. Love is so very dear and you have written about yours with great tenderness. Thank you so very much for sharing.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

Daniel J D
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6 posted 2000-11-29 10:36 PM


Startime,
Thank you, so very much. Pictures on the wall bring back too many good memories.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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7 posted 2000-11-29 10:40 PM


This is a wonderful piece and a very touching one.  You have moved me.  Thank you so much. I got alot of feeling from this and I'm going to process it all..
Once again, thank you..

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Poeminister
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8 posted 2000-11-29 10:45 PM


Daniel
This is excellent writing...touching and beautiful...thanks for sharing this...

take care,
Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Daniel J D
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9 posted 2000-11-29 10:46 PM


Ladycat,
Cheers, the sadness reflected in this poem is real. May God bless.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Daniel J D
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10 posted 2000-11-29 10:48 PM


Poetminister,
Thank you so much, your words are very comforting.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-11-30 01:29 AM


Daniel....WRITE to me...you know I am here for you...so WRITE
vandana
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12 posted 2000-11-30 06:24 PM


I know,It's hard to love someone whom you love,I have gone through with this kind of love and it is still hard for me to love him again.I don't feel the same like before when I first met him,Anyway,Liked it!!!!!!!!
vandana
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13 posted 2000-11-30 06:24 PM


I know,It's hard to love someone whom you love,I have gone through with this kind of love and it is still hard for me to love him again.I don't feel the same like before when I first met him,Anyway,Liked it!!!!!!!!
Daniel J D
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14 posted 2000-11-30 06:37 PM


Paula,
Thank you for your concern. I am writing...

Vandana,
Cheers and thank you. The loss of a member of your immediate is very hurtful. At times it takes ages to get over this loss, I'll keep fighting the pain.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SEA
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15 posted 2000-11-30 06:52 PM


DJD~ this spoke to my heart.....love this from you   -SEA
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