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Across The Room |
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PaulF Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 19 |
Across the room she softly sits from me… …If Elegance could speak I’d hear her name, Sung into my ear on chords of harmony… …Whispering I can never be the same… For once you’ve held her, she is all you see… She is all I see… …She is all I see… A Rose can only speak a little while… …In shades of red and white and velvet pink… In time it fades, but so unlike her smile… …Which carries poetry and makes me think… My heart is standing at the brink… …She is all I need… She is all I need… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a most graceful entrance into a lovely world of words...Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
W*E*L*C*O*M*E! I have to agree with Sunshine. Beautiful poem, lyrical... *smiles* -Tier |
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PaulF Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 19 |
Thanks for the *Welcome*, and thank you Sunshine for the card, that was cool. Paul |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely lovely - spiritual, full of love Welcome to the blue pages!  |
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PaulF Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 19 |
Thank you doreen, good to be here in the blue pages. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
PaulF, Well done and welcome to where poets hang out. Look forward to reading more from you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Paul..hello and welcome to our world...what a lovely entrance you have made...cant wait to see more. Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Paul! This is very beautiful! Just lovely! Denise |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Well... extremely romantic and well written poem with a unique style. Ditto... I will watch for your poems as well! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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