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Warrior Woman
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Warrior Woman |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Warrior Woman Karen Torbiak 2000 Joy courses through the breast of this Warrior Woman, for she knows she has fought the battles of her life and is the victor Now begins her journey to reach the world of the man whose love has given her the strength to face the twisted trails of her life and self The battles have been hard fought and won, with fear and pain stalking each path chosen as she steadfastly moved, courageously, forward Determination was the pure, strong, steed upon which she rides through nightmare realities that she may come face to face with her fears Willingness the armor, that protected her from hurt revisited, as it shielded her from the greatest hurt, to finally be banished Sent from the Higher Power this man who holds her heart ever urges her forward as he casts light into a darkness black with the pain of a lifetime filled with rejection Knowing the battles must be won that her dreams may be finally realized, and she may finally join with the man she loves With courage and an awareness that the Higher Power is with her she surged forward with her whole heart Battles many, be they large or small, must be waged from a life so filled with pain, unending as the are faced, fought and won Gaining strength and self-esteem with each battle makes her armor shine the brighter as fights the battle of her life Joy fills the breast of this Warrior Woman as she kneels, with love, at the feet of this man who fills her dreams and spirit for he is the reward blessed to her The gift she brings is the precious gift of self with willingness, determination and courage showing a woman now freed to love completely Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
WOW! This is terrific! Good tale, well written, romantic and wonderful. Really enjoyed the read. jwesley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
IF she is free to love completely, then she has won the battle! What a testimony! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
"precious gift of self" the one and only thing any one can ever give. Your last two stanzas really stand out . |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Startime, this is fantastic, a brilliant wonderful piece from you. Really magical write from you. I love this one. take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Startime, Very well written, lots of strength there. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Thank you all so very much for the wonderful comments. This board is so filled with love that it takes my breath away. Much love to you all from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a wonderfully romantic tale!! May she always love freely and completely. Great writing here my friend.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The gift she brings is the precious gift of self with willingness, determination and courage showing a woman now freed to love completely ============================================ *sigh* *sigh* DOUBLE *sigh* GR8! 1derful! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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