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Please, don't tease
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Please, don't tease |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
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Please, don't tease... Oh please, don't tease such lingering kiss pour heavenly bliss luscious breathing slightly squeezing intriguing trace guiding hidden places bare feminine treasures sighing with pleasure oh please, tease. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, What a way to celebrate your birthday, Rite on, Right on! Write on Gurl. Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heh, heh, heh, very cute!!! oh, how we don't want to be teased...and yet, when we're not...does anyone care about being playful with us? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~  I LOVE THIS!! Wow.....very nice  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OOOH you go girl!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, This is a beautiful message. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your wonderful reply, forgive me that I don't thank you by name now, because I haven't much time right now, but do know that I appreciate your reply's very much and that I love ya all. Charisma |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well, I have to hand it to you on this one... My wife Rosemary don't understand teasing... but then... Well, we won't get into that..! Nice read. dale |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Dale: thank you for your kind reply, I'm sorry that you don't know the pleasure of teasing, but well you are a poet, so I think that you can tease your wife a bit, words and a smile are a terrific weapon for some teasing.....right |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You share the true treasure of the tease so well with this one my friend. I for one love a good tease as it seems to add that extra element of tantilization and responsiveness. Loved it and belated birthday wishes to you. Many hugs to you and even more wishes for your days to be filled with not only happiness but with those alluring teases as well. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah yes... a little teasing is fun...  (you and i are writing along the same lines here--i posted one called 'you tease me'!  )very cute! hugs, g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: (((hugs))) back at ya.....thank you for your wonderful wishes and I am glad that you love it. dg: yes I know, I wrote this one on the same time as you did though, but you was first with posting and I didn't post mine, forgot him and when I look back in my notebook, I found him again and well I decided to post it by now, love those teasing lines .... Charisma |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Oh Charisma please, yes tease, and caress me please (ha,ha) I loved the rhythm of this which explains why that little mini-poem is above....wonderful piece! Nathan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Nate: mmmm......who is here a tease now. *LOL*....loved your reply |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOHHHH I love this sweet tease of a poem well done Charisma...you conveyed a lot of emotion in a few very well chosen lines perfect impact...  take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Janet: thank you for your lovely reply, I'm always glad with your comment, I appreciate them highly. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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