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Words That Form and Command |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Thoughts, Fading in and out, Through this haze, Of peaceful deprivation. Moonless dark, Evokes a certain mood, As the winter, Settles in for the night. Rainy January will soon be here, Bringing back the feel, Of past lovers, Holding hands in a warm car. In these hours of desperation, Sleep is forced to the back seat, While words haunt and demand, Linger and awaken. Two minutes until eyes close, Abandoning will, For sleep and dreams. Rest now, Hush now, For the night soon escapes, And slips away, Before the tyrant daylight comes. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Tempt, I'm surprised you ever find the time to write, your always reading... but when you write... you really write... Nice to see you poet-tress love dale |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ I like it when ya' dig in ! This is really good. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . just wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This read like a sweet lullaby What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
These images are really wonderful. They do sing like a sad song. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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