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When Freckles Fly
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When Freckles Fly |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When Freckles Fly they come, they go like soft brown snow and have been called kisses of sun, so… here they are, on fair cheek come with sun, they come peek to see if seen, to see if why some would seek, to see them shy they come, they go like soft sweet sigh and have been called sunkisses…why? here they are, touch the skin of the daughter, come within she of blonde hair, skin fair and soft the kiss of freckle rare they come, they go like soft sweet kiss and have been seen as remiss, why? cross the bridge, and cross the cheek sunfreckles cause your skin to pink and give shimmer and tan glow sunkisses, across your nose Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a pleasant rhyme, sunshine! It smiles across the page! Do YOU have freckles? Can I play connect-the-dots sometime?  This is delightful....  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this was a delightful read..carefree and upbeat..with just a touch of tongue in cheek. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Coming from someone who is covered with freckles, this was very sweet! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I'm going to tell you that this is SWEET ! Oh so very, very SWEET ! I always called them a sprinkle of frinkles on my youngest son. Ohhhhhhhh ... this mommie's heart is melting ! If it wasn't so late I'd call him RIGHT NOW ! But ... I will send him this SWEET poem and we will both smile with remembering. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is great Sunshine. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, This is fabulous, I adore this one, I really and truly do. By the by, I've got freckles lots and lots of them, and yes I am very fair skinned.  This is a delightful write I really love it. Take care Majestic Freckly Marsha |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Being a redhead I can relate to this oh, so well!! Loved it. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
This is really sweet. It is hard to read with out getting a grin across your face. I even tried to sing it.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ALL pretty blonde women have freckles. And ... some blonde men, too. Some, of course, have more than others. You notice them a lot on the beach. Or when dancing. Or just before a kiss. Thanks for putting it into words. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You should see me in summer, I look like someone took a paint brush and flicked it at me!  I think freckles are cute! (I say that because I have them, you know ) Enjoyed this one very much Sunshine! -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Karilea~ This is simple wonderful, written like a fairytale. Should be included with the "tooth fairy" and the like. Beautiful. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many darling comments...so many freckles to play connect the dot with...so many freckles holding us in tandem... thank you all! You've made it a sunkissed day... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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