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Passions Gallery--Marge Tindal (Eagle's Dawn)
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Passions Gallery--Marge Tindal (Eagle's Dawn) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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she awoke that morning before the dawn Great Spirit called to her and, as the first light of dawn touched her eye she was taken to the other plane she could see herself flying above the land in another time, in another place she flew high on eagle's wing above the lake and trees amazed at Great Spirit's gifts to her and her kind the wind carried her beyond the mountains to that place where they lived that place where they existed in peace with the land in harmony with nature and gave thanks to Great Spirit for all given and, as she flew above them on her eagle's wings, their song mixed with the cry of her own voice, her own voice, now the eagle's voice singing. . . We n' de ya ho, We n' de ya ho We n' de ya ho, We n' de ya ho, ho ho ho He ya ho he ya, Ya ya ya together, they praised Great Spirit together, they were one with the land together, they shared the land and Great Spirit cared for them and loved them. . . then, the sun drew back, and she was back on this plane she remembered why she was called, and her role here and, in the distance, she heard the eagle's cry and saw the dawn for the first time. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- Note: The Cherokee song that I have included here is called the "Cherokee Morning Song", and was sung by the Cherokee to greet the dawn. Translation follows: I am of the Great Spirit, Ho! I am of the Great Spirit, Ho! I am of the Great Spirit, Ho! I am of the Great Spirit Ho! It is so, it is so. Great Spirit, Great Spirit, Great Spirit Thank you. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!FANTASTIC. How I love these. Such talent and love poured into each one. This is wonderful. Thank you so very much. More pleaseLove I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
White Feathers flies indeed...and she is beautiful. Well done, Sven! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh Sven ... what better way to capture this lovely woman's grace, than through the beautiful wings of her spirit. Wonderful Sven ... you've penned a warm and cherished tribute to this marvelous friend. Hugs to you Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW.this is AWESOME... and she is going to adore this... you have done a wonderful job working in her love of the Cherokee spirit... excellent Sven..this is so well done Margie is a mentor and friend to us all and she is due this tribute... jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh everytime I find one of your tributes I just know I am gonna betaken to a different realm...and you NEVER disappoint me...our Lady Marge will love this |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Wonderful Sven..... You are really doing something neat here! Love this piece Sven... Can't seem to find the words I'm searching for.... figures. At any rate... I enjoyed this a lot! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh Sir, never to have met Marge but to read her poems, I feel you have captured the heart and spirit of this great lady. You are the master of words. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I am applauding this one. You have captured her spirit from which is derived her exuberance, her love, her passion, her beauty, her eloquence, and her charm Well done, Mr. Curator Liz |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, you have captured the essence of Marge in this lovely write... but then you always do! Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, then, IS White Feather... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven, loud applaud for you, with this wonderful piece for Marge, she will adore this one, and its great to read your excellent tribute. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Startime, thank you!! There will be more Martie, high in the sky. . . thank you!! Kit, thank you my friend. . . her wings are indeed large. . . Jan, a mentor she has been indeed to many of here. . . including me. . . thank you Paula, glad that I can take you there. . . Irie, the fact that you enjoyed this is enough for me. . .thank you. . . inot2B, thank you my friend. . . she is indeed a wonderful person Elizabeth, thank you for seeing her in this. . . Kethry, thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, indeed it is. . . Charisma, I hope that she does. . . thank you for reading. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven in word and message..James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Excellent work my friend. You have captured her well and given us all a peek at her golden heart. She is a very special lady. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have really done it here, Sven. Marge is indeed the spirit of Passions....very well done....I salute you, sir. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You have touched the wings of this 'eagle' ... You have pleased the voices of the ancients. In my heritage we have a tradition of sitting the Vision Quest ... you have touched the very essence of the plane on which I stand when opening myself up for the Great Spirits to enter and bring the gifts of the past. They come - I listen. I am but the vessel into which their concerns for this earth are poured. My mission is to share with others. And it is so ... we are one. No one could be more honored than I am at this lovely piece. The Cherokee Morning Song has filled the dawning of the day for most of my life. I learned it at the knee of my great grandmother. I thank you so much for this lovely crafting. *To all who have come to know me - know that I am honored to extend the hand of friendship and to draw you into the true circle of friends. Thank you, Sven ... you soar on my thoughts. We n' de ya ho ! ~*White Feather*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An amazing and perfect tribute to Marge! It is evident that you really researched and put your heart and soul into this piece! This is by far your best of the series. It's so good to see a tribute here for Marge, she deserves it and them some. Be very proud of this poem Sven! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
She shall forever soar not only within these walls but within this heart as well and you have portrayed her not only with your beautiful words for her but in a manner in which she deserves to be portrayed and that is with the words of her own people. Excellent penning. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, thank you my friend. . . LW, she is very special to all of us. . . glad that you like this one. . . Balladeer, thank you sir. . . it has been my honor. . . Melissa, thank you my friend. . . I could think of nothing better to salute the Spirit of Passions with than this. . . Mark, their words are a part of her. . . and so she is a part of them. . . thank you. . . Marge, my friend and fellow spirit. . . it has been my honor to pen this for you. . . we are indeed blessed to have you share your words with all of here. . . it is your gift, it is your calling and you meet it every day, from dawn to dusk. . . may your words continue to inspire, to teach, and to help us soar. . . blessings on you White Feather. . . always. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Sven, how sweet this one is of our adored Marge.. She is golden winged in flight With her words in rhyme And her tender loving heart.. Coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
WOW ..you have outdone yourself on this one sven..fantastic... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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