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She Never Left
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She Never Left |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She never left Each room echoes familiar ways Intimate nights, well known days. And the atmosphere weighs with aim Even the doors call her name. She glides with me a sleeper's lake Captured in her shadows wake. And she haunts me each place a trace With a residue of grace. Indiscernible yet a ghost My now and forever host. From a source that surrounds me By a force that confounds me. And I would it no other way I would she forever stay. I would my life no other role Our essence no other goal. She is my sate, my love, my mate Bond and bound in souls estate. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ohhhhhhh Seymour, this is so beautiful.......  -SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--"She is my sate, my love, my mate Bond and bound in souls estate." A lovely poem!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I am begging you...PLEASE allow us to publish this in the Valentine issue of Digital Passions!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!  Did I mention that I love it? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love the SOUNDS of it, the tone of it and the message within it. It's a superb piece of love one can sink his/her teeth into. It has words that one may enjoy chewing on. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Each room echoes familiar ways Intimate nights, well known days. =================== From a source that surrounds me By a force that confounds me. And I would it no other way I would she forever stay. I would my life no other role Our essence no other goal. She is my sate, my love, my mate Bond and bound in souls estate. ================= Oh my I missed your rhyme ... and OH my I adore this poem ... Sy-guy this poem makes me wanna do crazy things ...  first Im gonna dab a verse or two behind me ears..then Im gonna sip some rhyme like fine wine...then Im gonna walk barefoot in your cadence...then Im gonna...Well..you get me drift  *winkiewinkie* later-love when ya sate me-gator me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This one is sheer love. A heaping helping of it ! You are so rhythmic ... and this is perfect. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Seymour, Good day,...this is excellent writing. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you so much. Martie, And thank you for the lovely. Poet deVine, Thank you so much and by all means you may publish it in The valentine issue of digetal Passions. *L* Sy Vas, Beautiful comment, I thank you. JM, You are too much, winkiewinkie Love ya Sy Marge, And you are sheer sweetness. *L* Poeminister, Thank you for the nicely done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
haunting rhythm comes with rhyme long hallway harkens clock's chime taunting love's most wakeful clime wrong to suffer alone night's time  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Seymour this is beautiful - i shall look out for your poems from now on (and thank you for the kind comment you made on the other thread) philip |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my, this is so beautiful.....but well these words aren't ment for me *sigh*.....you are soooooo romantic.....love it.... Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My, my this is a pocketful of appreciation...James |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy....I understand where this one comes from and I can relate to it very well....very nice work! |
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