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Dream Weaver's Snowy Night of Magic(part two)
Karen Torbiak
2000

Memerized by the lighted doorway
with him standing in warm welcome
she was barely aware of the driver
offering to help her from the sleigh
and had to tare her eyes away from
him to put aside the fur and step down

She walked slowly forward not noticing
the music or incredible forest of trees
the surrounded this beautiful cabin set
in a scene where magic seem to lay with
the sparkles of diamonds on the snow
as it reflect the light of the full moon

She was drawn forward with a power
very familiar to her soul but one
that she had given up believing could
exist in this day and age when souls
no longer searched out the one who
was meant for them above all others

As she moved closer she could not take
her eyes from his face and saw written,
clearly there, understanding that her
heart was responding but still
confusion filled her with fear as her
soul tried hard to convince her of reality

She went directy into his embrace
to rest her head against his shoulder making
sure that this was no dream like before
but willing to accept if it was for
these feelings flowing through her
were like no others she had ever felt

Wrapping her in a protective embrace
he takes her into the cabin which
was warm and welcoming with a cheery
fire blazing and crackling in the fireplace
while before the fire was a pure ermine rug
that was so soft and inviting to see

He removes her coat as he gently leads her across
the room to sit her upon the rug leaving plenty
of room for himself but he turns from her gaze
to take a chilledbottle of champagne
from a silver bucket and pours two glasses
from a bottle saved for this special occasion

She looks about the cabin with eyes that sparkle
with delight to see how the season has
filled this small place set in deep in
the woods for pine boughs line the mantle
and frame the doorway and windows bringing
the sweet scent and beauty of the forest inside

She notices the holly berries scattered among
the boughs along with the fact that candles
are placed throughout the room casing
romantic shadows on walls and ceiling
and giving an even more romantic feel
that fills her with a sense of well being

Soft music is playing in the background
as her attention is drawn to the snapping
fire where she is mesmerized by the dancing
flames as they lick the logs with the red and
yellow tongues that seem to flow around
encasing them as they reach with their finger upward

She more senses his presence than feels him
near as she pulls her gaze away from the
beauty of the flames to look into dark eyes
that reflect the fire but which also blaze
with a love and desire for her that leaves
her breathless as she tries to sip the champagne

Taking the glass from her hand and placing it
on the table he turns his attention back
to this woman who his very soul has known
thoughout all time and who his heart has
longed and searched for his whole life
knowing deep within he would find her someday

With the gentlest of touch he traces her eyes
and runs his fingers down her cheek to finally
trace the moist, softness of her lips and when he
feels the quivering response to his touch he
leans forward, gazing deeply into her eyes,
and taste the sweetness of her kiss

She melts close into him as he wraps his arms
around her, pulling her against his chest
that he can mingle their breath as he kisses
her with a deep longing that brings a moan
from each of them setting hearts beating with
a loud pounding they are sure the other can hear

Time is lost to these two lovers as they
drink deeply of the essence of the one who
has been a part of their soul from the
beginning of time and they are finally
allowed full release of the love and passion
which has been reserved to be shared only with each other

With a sigh they end the kiss but he
does not release her as he pulls her close
against him and wraps his arms possesively
over the one of his dreams determinded to
never let her go for he has searched so
very long to have her here at his side

They are so lost in the love of each other
that they barely notice the sounds of joy
coming from outside but as if by magic the
light laughter penetrates their senses and
with a sigh he stands pulling her to her feet
still holding her close for she is precious to him

Together they go to the door which they open
on a scene that touches the magical soul
within the heart of these two lovers as they
are blessed to gaze upon that which many
believe to exist only in books of fantasy
but which they have always believed in their hearts

The deepness of the night has wrought a magic
here that is open to their view as they gaze
upon the sparkling snow and are awed by
the sight of a perfect fir tree in the middle
of the yard with the most amazing and enchanting
scene is being played out before their eyes

Lighting up the tree are hundreds of the tiniest lights
that if one looks clearly one can see they are
little fairies darting in and out within the branches
as they carry the smallest lanterns which make the
tree appear as if it has been brought to life by a wonderous magic all its own as it reflects the joy of life

There are several forest animals are sitting around
the base of the tree as if waiting in expectation
for something marvelous to occur and the lovers
can't help but feel the excitement building as they
follow the eyes of the animals to the heavens
and gasp in unison as they watch a light desending

Like a brilliant star the light floats gently
to the earth lighting up the yard as it expands only
slowly to fad leaving behind a beautiful woman
wrapped in a pure white ermine cloak and hat
and who both the lovers recognize as the woman
who has filled their dreams with love eternal

For she is none other than Dream Weaver well known
to all who still believe in magic and the eternal
love of soul mates and she has come to this small
place to touch the night with a magic that only
she can weave to create a sense of romance and love
in the dead of winter far from city lights and noise

Her face is lit by the love she has for all living
as she raises her hand with a delicate movement
and releases a sparkling mist that drapes itself
over the branches of the tree decorating it in
dripping snow that leaves a magical appearance
on the branches as the fairies continue to dance

The lovers move closer into the open door finally
feeling the chill of the night only to see as they
do Dream Weaver lifts her eyes to them with and
with a sparkle in her eyes raises her hand
sending a shower of glittering mist that engulfs
them penentrating into their souls with a heat of pure love

The faces of the lovers are lit with joy as they
marvel that now the skies are filled with beautiful
big snowflakes that just seem to lend a greater magic
to the night as some how they know that this snow will
make it imposible for them to return to the world of men
for a long time which joy is reflected in their eyes

Turning to enter the cabin they know they have been
blessed by the Dream Weaver with the priceless gift
of White Gold Love and still without the need of words
they know within their hearts that this love they
feel is perfect and cannot be destroyed by man
so they kneel and give thanks for the love gifted them

On this Snowy Night of Magic they have found the love
their hearts have seached and dreamed of so
with sighs of contentment they take their places
before the fire where they will share their
hearts, hopes and dreams for the life they
are destined to live as two hearts made one soul




Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-11-28 04:50 PM


Yea!!!!! I've been waiting for this!! Wonderful ending.....I just love this story! FANTASTIC!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-28 05:13 PM


Wow!  I agree, great ending, wonderful story...very well done my friend!

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3 posted 2000-11-28 08:52 PM


*giggling with delight* I was very worried about the length of this one even with it being in two parts. I am so glad you like it. There was just so much in the vision. Much love from me to both of you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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