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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-11-28 03:16 PM


Never Look Away

I adore one woman in my eyes I see
and I'm not really sure of her feelings for me.
My friend told me that she's laughing at me,
laughing at me, just laughing at me.
He doesn't think she feels the same as I
and I realize only she would know her heart not I.
Only she would know what to do if her heart be true.
Could her heart be true?
I confess my heart thinks of her night and day
and as my eyes admire her beauty they look not away.
They are pleased to stay and to never look away.
And each time her lips linger on mine
I have found heaven one more time.
Happiness is hers and mine in heaven one more time.
Alas in her arms I feel so secure.
Gladly I would give my life to her.
To live it with her.
Just giving the rest of my life to her.
Forever and a day I would never look away.

Jameslee@November28,2000




[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 11-28-2000).]

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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-11-28 03:20 PM


James oh James...you deserve so much more than her laughter...I am here for you you know that...love ya

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



Startime
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2 posted 2000-11-28 03:24 PM


How very sad. This is filled with such love and longing. I pray you find one who makes it clear she loves you. Thank you so much for the read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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3 posted 2000-11-28 03:34 PM


James~ I certainly hope she isn't laughing at you.......your loving heart deserves so much more than that.......I hope, as I always do for you, that she realizes what a rare man you are and grabs you up and doesn't let go! Enjoyed your sweet poem   -SEA
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4 posted 2000-11-28 05:44 PM


Liked it!!!!!!!!!!
Sven
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5 posted 2000-11-28 06:39 PM


James my friend. . . there's only one way to know. . .

Excellent poem. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-11-30 02:47 PM


Thank you Paula, Startime, Sea, vandana and Sven for the nice replies...
I also hope she is not laughing at me...I hope we will be singing in the sunshine and laughing at the romantic moon...James

dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-11-30 02:53 PM


aw james...what a good heart you must have..if you find for sure that she is laughing..i hope you'll find the strength to 'look away'..you deserve more than her laughter..unless you are laughing together..  

hugs, g


"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

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8 posted 2000-11-30 03:06 PM


James I hope that you will find what you deserve, and that the lady deserves you, cause you are a man with a golden heart.

((huge warm hug))
Charisma

Victoria
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9 posted 2000-11-30 04:11 PM


Any woman who laughs at you...would have to be a witch...maybe your friend is jealous..i dont know..but you are a smart man..you will be able to figure it out on your own.HUGS

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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10 posted 2000-12-03 06:52 AM


Thank you dgvarner, Charisma and Victoria for the nice comments...
Its interesting because in the beginning its as if your eyes are blind to what is really going on but eventually my eyes open wide and I can see very clearly where a persons heart is...James

Wishmaster
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11 posted 2000-12-03 07:00 AM


How often we are blind to the truth by love. You may already know where this romance is leading, but your heart may not want to listen.

Let the fate's decide, if you are to be together, you will be. Only time can see it's hand in this game of poker.

Wishmaster.

~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-12-05 03:48 PM


Yes I have noticed that my heart doesn't want to listen...it wants what it wants and desperately...time will tell if feelings are mutual...all I have to do is be myself...the good ones will endure...James
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