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Passions Gallery--butterflies don't cry (words within) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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scribe of life stir us into your story tend to our soul describe destiny, obscurity into rest see in fond rose style of olde tint so red restful dry eye flyer on deft sun listen for dust tour under soft soil frost or tinder tide isle fury ode is tired cry truly tune dry eyes --------------------------------------------------------------- Note: The title words within refers to the fact that all of the words of this poem can be found in the letters of "butterflies don't cry". Thank you.  ------------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
scribe of life stir us into your story tend to our soul describe destiny, Our beautiful Butterfly is a gift to us all.....her words touch our hearts and warm our souls... Loved this -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Too cool, Sven!!! What a great idea...and I wanna hug Holly too! An awesome lady, that one...thank you both for being. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Holly sings when poet rings her rhyme with time and thought and tender care... To Holly! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You gift us again with your amazing talent for words as you pour out how one has touched your heart. I truly love all of these as I get to know each one through your eyes. Thank you so much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
scribe of life stir us into your story tend to our soul describe destiny, obscurity into rest see in fond rose style of olde tint so red restful dry eye flyer on deft sun listen for dust ================ so ....you see her flame too  yes...our beautiful butterfly writes with so much honesty and emotion that we can not help but be drawn to her words... or her tears Well done Sven ...once again jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly is a gift I give to myself each and everytime I find her here...and for you to grace us with this beautiful poem...well what can I say except beautiful Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
another wonderful description of a wonderful poet in this family, you have a good insight and captured her quite well. excellent as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Thank you for including me in your gallery Sven I don't deserve such a beautiful tribute but thank you from the bottom of my heart~ I truly don't feel worthy of any of the kind remarks here but am touched by the display of friendship in your replies and hearts. Many thanks to all of you~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, Butterflies, you and I are all elite, but you and she are more so. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to all. . . SEA, indeed they do. . . thank you. . . serenity, glad that you liked the idea. . . and thank you for reading. . . Sunshine, I'll second that. . . Startime, thank you my friend. . . I am glad to be your guide to all of these wonderful people. . . Jan, well spoken my friend. . . thank you. . . Paula, thank you. . . a gift that we get to unwrap every day. . . Charisma, thank you my friend. . . Kethry, you are indeed worthy of that title also my friend. . . thank you. . . Holly, you are indeed loved and welcomed by these and many more. . . it is my honor to include you in this series. . . for you have always been an inspiration. . . and a wonderful poet. . . thank you. . .and I'm glad that you enjoyed this. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured so many of Holly's wonderful qualities that draw me into her beautiful writings Sven ... this is just enchanting, and a lovely inspiration you are Butterflies ... many hugs to you both! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sven--You have captured the butterfly so beautifully...you have a wonderful way of being able to do this...thank you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WOW!. This is an amazing poetic accomplishment, but even greater, it is a portait of our lovely butterfly Excellent, Sven Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ What talent you display - in displaying the talents of others. *Yeah ... she's okay - as butterflies go ! *wink* On wings of fragility, the strength of her words give her the ability to soar. Muchly loved and admired. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I'm impressed, this is great Sven. The fact that you used her name and penned a piece from it is awesome. Well done Sir! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
It's really amazing what you've done here. A wonderful poem for someone whose words I really like. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven: a perfect tribute to Holly, she does deserve it. And Sven, you are truly talented and very caring to have written so many poems for others! Maybe we should all write a poem just for you! But, then again, words are not enough to show you how much we love ya!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully written and no better butterfly to write of than our own little butterfly that spreads so much joy and happiness in our lives within the blue pages. It must have taken some time for you to come up with words and put them together without using a single letter not found in "butterflies_dont_cry" and that shows your dedication to making your poems honoring the poets here special. Well done again sir. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, This one is impressive. I know it was a challenge, but you have done an excellent job with it. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kit, thank you. . . I have tried to show those here. . . Martie, thank you my friend. . . I have enjoyed this. . . Liz, thank you for reading. . . glad that you enjoyed this. . . Marge, thank you. . . your words humble me my friend. . . Irie, glad that you liked it. . . Passions Voice, thank you. . . and I'm glad that you've acquainted yourself with her words. . . Melissa, you really know how to embarass me don't you? LOL  Thank you. . . Mark, well, I did have a little help. . . I found a web site that anangrams any phrase that you put in. . . however, I was not prepared for the 450 pages of anagrams that the program returned!! I mananged to find about 20 or so pages of real words. . . but then had to work them togehter into something that made sense. . . and here it is. . . thank you. . . LW, thanks. . . glad that you liked it. . . it was indeed a challenge. . . but once I had the idea. . . it wouldn't go away!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, this is amazing the talent you have with your pen all of which scribed with such dedication and tender heart... This truly depicts 'Butterfly'.. she's a true sweetie to us all... As always thank you for the read and I have lots to catchup on in your passion family gallery... Coco |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven-- and i stand applauding you once again my friend! you have captured the essence of holly to the very T. and holly YES you deserve all of these kind remarks and more. you and sven and many others here are what make this the greatest poetry forum on the net and one of the most loving and beautiful places to be a part of. take care. ~amy~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
*amy's note-- i've noticed a lot of pain & hurt in our "family" here as late. i am so glad we all can share our feelings in depth and express ourselves to one another. here is just a lil something for every- one here. take care. ~amy~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ some things happen in life and we have no idea why why the winds are forever changing and time just passes by but all happens for a reason God does indeed have a plan and everything that happens fate and destiny do have a hand unbearable pain sometimes occurs and it leaves us alone in tears the inevitable persona of "death" forever leaving us with our fears but sometimes good in life happens and miracles occur and come true and it's those times that we must hold onto allowing the grace of light through life is a ever changing cycle sometimes just don't make no sense at all seems no matter how hard we try we're always hitting another wall but then when you least expect it destiny steps in, and the bad is turned around she never makes much noise comes and goes without making a sound but always know this one thing you can forever bet it's true miracles and dreams do occur how do i know? because i see them in every single one of you... love you all much! ~amy~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i too think its awesome of you to try to compose a poem based on the letters of butterflies_dont_cry...i appreciated the hard work that went into this one |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is amazing that you could do that..you must have taken an excedrin after his one ha...wonderful tribute to BDC... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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