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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-11-28 11:03 AM


A pox on you Sir Sven!
Look at what you did!
The gallery portraits, you did pen
Have opened muse's lid
And now I have to write
All day and half the night.

My pressure cooker muse
Is flowing forth and then
Now my body must abuse
Before it rests again
A pox on you Sir Sven
Inspiring me to write again

Sir Sven look, what you did
I hope you're satisfied
Of inspiration I'll be rid
When I have writ and tried
A pox on you I say
You've got me writing night and day

You are a poxy friend
Of this I'm very sure
I'll see it to the very end
Unless you have the cure
I'm gifting you contagious pox
That in return YOUR write unlocks.



Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-28 11:06 AM


Wonderful!  May we ALL be poxed!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-11-28 11:15 AM


I think I've got a case of small pox...

(BOO to me!) Lol...

Cute poem, Kethry! Enjoy the ride and write on!

Sven
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3 posted 2000-11-28 12:35 PM


LOL  

Who me???



Thank you Kethry. . . glad that I could give it to you. . .  . . . hopefully now, it'll become catching!!!  



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Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-11-28 12:41 PM


But you'll only get it once!  Write on!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



Kethry
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5 posted 2000-11-28 03:36 PM


Sunshine,
yeah it's a poxy way to go about it, and I needed to lighten up a little. Tag you're it.

Serenity,
There is NOTHING small about your pox. Write on!  

Irish Rose,
unless you get re-infected by some-one else.  

Sven,
Yes you, you pain...you character...you wonderful man...a pox on you, write on!  

                                     

Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Startime
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6 posted 2000-11-28 03:39 PM


Delightful response to a wonderful man.*giggling with delight* I am glad he has inspired you to write. If this is an example I will eagerly look forward to more. Thank you so very much for this read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

Marsha
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7 posted 2000-11-28 03:40 PM


Kethry, this is sooooooo you, and soooooo good. Yes I love this one, and you do these so well. Fantastic smiles you've given me.
Take care
             Slushy Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-11-28 03:41 PM


Little one, I think I've poxed my limit today...but more shall come...if you will read...?

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Paula Finn
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9 posted 2000-11-28 03:44 PM


Kethry's got the bug Kethry's got the bug....hehehe...EagleOne was great girl....expecting much more out of you.
Kethry
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10 posted 2000-11-28 04:03 PM


Startime,
Well you must be infected if you could read and understand, Write on!  

Marsha,
Well I know that you are poxed sooo maybe I gave it to you.  

Sunshine anytime you are poxed, I will read you...and anytime you are not.  

Paula,
...but wait there's more, with this pox you also get a tribute to Balladeer, there's still more...a tribute to Elizabeth forthcoming...there's still more... with this pox you get a free set of peotic verse and a free rhyming dictionary ...in your head.  

Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2000-11-28 09:01 PM


Kethry~
I'll have a box of that Sven Pox.
A perfect gift to give for Xmas.
When I hang my Xmas Pox -
I'll think of you.

This was sooooooooo delightful.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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12 posted 2000-11-29 02:46 AM


Marge,
what a poxy friend you are...Christmas pox coming your way.
write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


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