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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-11-28 01:09 AM


Shadow of a doubt
The kind that leaves you breathless
Searching for the truth


Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
1 posted 2000-11-28 01:14 AM


so simply lovely!!!!

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2000-11-28 01:20 AM


A Senryu that rings so true.
Funny how a one little thing can leave us digging and search
for answers, and the truth.



~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-11-28 01:24 AM


Very true! I couldn't have written it better ...I love the way you think..... so keep it up my dear honest poet...ethome
Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2000-11-28 02:40 AM


Paula,
Have no doubt and you will feel much stronger within.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-11-28 10:25 AM


Amazing how such few words can gather so
many tears and emotions...hugs to you
Paula...may the shadows be chased away but
glorious sunshine~


The best and most beautiful things
in the world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt with the heart~
*??*

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-11-28 10:34 AM


I know this feeling Paula...amazing, how you painted confusion with such simple and direct lines!  Love it.
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
7 posted 2000-11-29 12:29 PM


A Whispers Caress...thank you

Irie...the truth is worth digging for...thank you

ethome...glad you like the way I think sweet poet man...thanks

Daniel...there are times you doubt no matter how hard you try not to

Holly...thanks for the hugs sweet butterfly

Serenity...thanks


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