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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-27 11:46 PM


Defining poets
Enjoying when
New ones say
I'm just amazed
She's a smile
Ever after

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-27 11:51 PM


Perfect to a T

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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2 posted 2000-11-27 11:57 PM


She is the warmth of Passions smile!  
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3 posted 2000-11-28 12:47 PM


Sven--she is, and I'm so glad!
Charisma
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4 posted 2000-11-28 04:51 AM


Perfect.....and wonderful write..

Charisma

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5 posted 2000-11-28 09:15 AM


Cool acrostic ... dont nkow if Ive ever seen one that spelled out at both ends like that...
how do we pay tribute to the queen of reply...
over 14,000 posts if my memeory serves me...
Denise is always here...quietly reading and encouraging us...watching over her flock of poets ....
she is the heart of what the spirit of passions is about...
and she writes a sweet sonnet as well  
great, creative work Sven
jm

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6 posted 2000-11-28 10:47 AM


Written for a very special lady.. very nice sven

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-11-28 10:58 AM


Sven~
This is a lovely double acrostic done to perfection for our friend.

Denise~
You just ARE !
Right from the first night I came here -
you've ALWAYS been there with a smile,
a helping hand and your friendship that has grown.

You've been a wonderfully encouraging beacon of light
and I so appreciate you.

The beauty of your poetry has lit the page time and time again.
Your talent shines.
Thank you, sweet lady for being a friend to all.
*Heart-Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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Kethry
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8 posted 2000-11-28 11:09 AM


Sven,
cool double acrostic, last time I tried one of those it ended up huge,However as I'm not talking to you at the moment, (See a pox on you) I can't say how good and accurate this portrait of Denise is.
Write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


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9 posted 2000-11-28 11:13 AM


what a lovely way to pay tribute...yes, indeed her short replies have touched us all..
Sven
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10 posted 2000-11-28 12:39 PM


Sunshine. . . excellent. . .

deVine. . . she is that and so much more. . .

Martie, I'm glad also!!  

Charisma, thank you my friend. . .

JM, I'm not the first to do such a Double. . . glad that you like it. . .

Victoria, she is special indeed. . .

Marge, thank you my friend. . . what better way to pay tribute to our Laureate. . .  

Kethry, thank you. . . and I hope that you'll be talking to me again soon. . .  

kaile, short they may be. . . they are wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-11-29 05:32 AM


Wonderful double acrostic, Sven
All you say is true, but nobody meantioned her beautiful Irish blue eyes. That's because (I am proud to say) I am the only one who has met her, and I was immediately struck by her beautiful eyes,
Denise is the Guardian Angel of Passions, the Sonnet Queen, the one who is always there for us, no matter what, with kind words, an avid reader of everyone's poetry, always commenting with a smile, and on the other side of that computer screen she watches over us with those piercing beautiful Irish blue eyes. Another clever portrait for the gallery.
Liz

ethome
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12 posted 2000-11-29 05:59 AM


Very good Sven love the accents and the truth told through your pen once again ...ethome
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13 posted 2000-11-29 06:48 AM


Incredible double acrostic Sven ... what a unique and clever way to pay tribute to such a wonderful woman. She is indeed "a smile ever after". I echo both Marge and Liz ... beautifully worded tributes to you Denise, and so well deserved. You are a wonder in this lovely haven. Beautiful Sven.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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14 posted 2000-11-29 10:24 AM


goooooooo big D as in dallas

goooooooo D as in defense

goooooooo poet D as in sharon

goooooooo D Snyder woohoo go Denise!!

Dennis L. White
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15 posted 2000-11-29 11:27 AM


S mart
V ibrant
E ntertaining
N oble !

How clever you are my friend! What a gracious tribute to our friend Denise! Well Done!
Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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16 posted 2000-11-29 12:17 PM


Bravo!!!*giggling* I am so very much loving this, my friend. Your talent is amazing and your love for each of these wonderful people is incredible. Thank you so very much.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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17 posted 2000-11-29 06:33 PM


I think it's amazing also, that you have taken such care in honoring all of these poets!  Thank you again, Sven.

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



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18 posted 2000-11-29 07:56 PM


I am very touched that you have included me in your Passions Gallery series, Sven, they are all lovely. Great job on the double acrostic! Thank you, and thanks everyone for all the lovely comments!

Denise

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Sven~ Yet another beauty, for a beauty of a woman! Enjoyed this, very well done!   -SEA
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20 posted 2000-11-29 08:40 PM


Now this is my kind of really good... This is one full nutshell my friend... and what a story lies within. A nice pentatonic scale projecting many chords of thought.

dale

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21 posted 2000-11-29 11:00 PM


Elizabeth, she is indeed the Guardian Angel. . . thank you my friend. . .  

ethome, thank you for reading. . .  

Kit, thank you. . .it just came out this way. . . what do you say about a woman who says so much??  

Walt, another cheer my friend?  Thank you!!  How can you go wrong with a cheer like that Denise???

Dennis, thank you sir. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

Startime, I have really enjoyed seeing your replies and am just happy that you've been enjoying these. . . thank you. . .  

Kathleen, I have tried to portray them as they speak to me. . . thank you for noticing. . .

SEA, thank you my friend!!

Lucky, thank you. . .indeed she does say a lot with a little. . . perhaps that's why this came out the way that it did. . .

Denise, to not include you in this Gallery would be like the Louvre without the Mona Lisa. . . it wouldn't be the same. . . I am glad that you enjoyed this. . . you set an example for all of us to follow. . . thank you my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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