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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Trembling Hands ~*Daniel J D*~ No strength left in me I cannot find a way To say that I hurt Deep within my heart Is broken, unreparable Can't find any syllable My body shakes, my hands tremble I search for no sorrow Not looking for tomorrow All I want is to know That you are fine And still want to be mine Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ oh this breaks my heart, I wish I could hold you and make it all better.......hugs to you for this beautiful display of emotions  -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, A broken heart is a broken dream, more than a nightmare. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ *Hugs* to you. You write so honestly of the hurt - I hope that the dream is dreamed again. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel* You've etched the words into tears and brought them to life on this page...such pain and longing you write of my friend...may your heart find healing within the poetry that you weave so very well~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Thank, yes I will take note and hopefully make the dream last. Butterflies, The tears are true tears of pain and heartache. The meaning of real love is within us, but unless we can share that love, pain exists. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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