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0 posted 2000-11-27 04:37 PM




Eclipsed

Sunshine rings the world
loving warmth and joyous smiles
Comes the night, eclipsed




Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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1 posted 2000-11-27 04:50 PM


Lovely Haiku,  nicely done...

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2 posted 2000-11-27 04:54 PM


Sunshine, I cannot picture you eclipsed...ever  

This is beautiful...

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3 posted 2000-11-27 04:58 PM


Well written in a difficult form.Loved it.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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4 posted 2000-11-27 11:18 PM


Poeminister, thank you...

'Deer...never say ever...oops...that's never say never...darn...

Tony, I adore this form...it seems to fit...thank you!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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5 posted 2000-11-27 11:20 PM


My friend. . . I think that you have made this form your own. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 2000-11-28 11:34 AM


you are on a roll with these haiku and i do so enjoy reading them
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7 posted 2000-11-28 09:41 PM


Sven, perhaps I have...they are so enjoyable...

Kaile, thank you for coming in to read...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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8 posted 2000-11-28 11:37 PM


Sunshine loves the world
giving warmth and joyous times
comes the night ... too bad

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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9 posted 2000-11-29 09:19 AM


Interloper....I am only eclipsed but for the moment...always to return...{~,^}

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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10 posted 2000-11-29 09:27 AM


wonderful haiku.....truly love this one,
hope to see more from you.

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2000-12-04 02:12 PM


Ah Charisma, I see I missed thanking you...for coming to read and for coming to share your marvelous works with us...



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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