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Beki
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0 posted 2000-11-27 01:58 PM



After the storm,
one gull, one piece of driftwood
floating together.

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-11-27 02:00 PM


Sounds so calming.

Elizabeth

Beki
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2 posted 2000-11-27 04:36 PM


Hmm I am not sure I was thinking of it as calming, being the aftermath of a storm but thanks for reading Elizabeth, I appreciate your responding  
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3 posted 2000-11-28 11:24 AM


yes, i sort of caught my breath when i read the words "one gull"....
Beki
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4 posted 2000-11-28 12:45 PM


I appreciate your reading and responding to all my poems Kaile, thanks a bunch!
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5 posted 2000-11-28 01:19 PM


I felt a calmness too, sorry, but the calm after a storm at the ocean is unbeatable..... -SEA
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6 posted 2000-11-28 01:24 PM


Bravo!!I love the vision of this. I found it so very soothing. Thank you so vey much.

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