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Ocean Haiku 01
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Ocean Haiku 01 |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
In this old shell I hear the distant echo of an older sea. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
That's awesome Beki...I love that thought. Elizabeth |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
EXCELLENT!!!!! I loved it. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent is the word that springs to mind for me also. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh this is wonderful. I will listen more closely in the shell and imagine  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you make me smile with this one, remembering the time that I hear the ocean in a shell.. excellent work .... Charisma |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beki~ I loved this! So pretty  -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks everyone, it reflects a very precious memory from my childhood...I was always hearing the ocean in shells |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
loved it too  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks for reading Kaile |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful Haiku, nicely done. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW I love this. How you can put so much in so few words is beyond me. Wonderful. Thank you so much for the read Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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