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Weaving Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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voices holding hands loving, magnified, tightens woven web of love Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like this. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
me too Elizabeth, thank you. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this too....  Charisma |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You are indeed very good at this. This one is exceptional. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma, thank you very much... EagleOne...an exceptional from you is exceptional indeed...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Superb, well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey now, this'n love ME! jwesley |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is wonderful, my friend........so beautiful in thought and style!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Daniel, James, Sunny...thank you all... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice way of putting it... "woven web of love" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! BTTT for you. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OH BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!THIS ONE I ABSOLUTELY LOVE. Thank you so very much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Woven Indeed With Finely Spun Thread |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very sweet... love captured in a few short lines... -Tier |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Startime, DreamSeeker, Tiersdien...look at the lovely names here...thank you so much for coming in to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
simple and elegant...hope you don't mind me bringing forth those I hadn't responded to... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
getting stronger every day. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wynter my friend, how could I ever mind having my poems read? Thank you!... Sven, thank you as well... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
What wonderful words you weave. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, my friend, Thank you... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
when that epic poem won't come to mind when the sonnet we want leaves us in a bind when you want a tanka but it says "no thank ya" concentrate then just on you and if you are blessed you'll create a haiku as beautiful as this one |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah my Mr. Yeats you bring a smile to my face my treasure of thee |
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