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The Living Loving Stream |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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When I think of all the good wines I have tasted I loved those good wines. When I think of all the pure time that's been wasted I miss that pure time. When I was drinking there was no thinking I thoughtI knew the right thing it came to be so frightening the time that I was losing finally found conclusion by a bubbling greenwood stream. When I think of all the good friends that were lovers, I love those good friends. When I think of all the good friends I have covered I miss those good friends. Some of them were dying I was always crying. I still miss their talking I'd love to see them walking these memories I'm draining as tender as they came in to the living loving stream. Well now the bell tolls sounding precious time Summer, Autumn, Winter and Spring always fall in line. I miss those good friends by the bubbling greenwood stream. I need my good friends in the living loving stream. When I think of all the good sleep I have wasted I need that good sleep. When I think of all the good deeds that I've tasted I'll do more good deeds. When I was faking hearts I was breaking Now I'm realizing to myself no lying good friends still beside me and the memories I need come from the living loving stream |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ A little different, and pleasurable, from your pen. 'I'd love to see them walking these memories I'm draining as tender as they came in to the living loving stream.' What loving thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well now the bell tolls sounding precious time Summer, Autumn, Winter and Spring always fall in line. I miss those good friends by the bubbling greenwood stream. I need my good friends in the living loving stream. When I think of all the good sleep I have wasted I need that good sleep. When I think of all the good deeds that I've tasted I'll do more good deeds. When I was faking hearts I was breaking Now I'm realizing to myself no lying good friends still beside me and the memories I need come from the living loving stream ================= wonderful reflection E-babes... to look back and draw upon the lessons we learned from both the mistakes we made and the things we learned from others.. we must be on the same wave length today...I woke up with verses on this subject... I like seeing all your different poetic faces here of late.. your styling my sweet Van-pal ... looking good  love ya me ~Till We Get the Healing Done~ Van Morrison Down those old ancient streets Down those old ancient roads Baby there together we must go Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till you're satisfied with your life Till you're satisfied with your life Till you're satisfied with your life And it's running right, and it's running right Till you deal with the poison inside Sometimes you've got to sit down and cry When you deal with the poison inside Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till you feel the tingle up your spine Till you're satisfied and you're mine Till you feel a tingle up your spine Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till you live in the glory of the One Till you live in the land of the sun Till you feel like your life has just begun Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till we dwell in the house of the Lord Till you don't have to worry no more Till you open a brand new world Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till it makes you feel alright Till you're satisfied with your life Till you know you live in the Light Till we get the healing done Oh till we get the healing done Till you look at the mountains every day Till you wash all your troubles away And you live right here in the day Till we get the healing done Oh till we get the healing done Oh till it's Truth and it's beauty and it's grace Till you've finally found your true place Till you know your original face Till we get the healing done Oh child, till we get the healing done Oh when everything's going right Till you're satisfied with your life Till you're living in the Light Till we get the healing done Oh till we get the healing done Oh when you feel it, when you feel it in your soul Baby, and you really know That you reap just what you sow When we get the healing done Oh till we get the healing done Till you know that it's working every time Till you work it out in your mind And you know it straight down the line Till you get the healing done Oh make no worry till we get the healing done Oh we gonna go back, back to our favourite place Oh look at it again See it all through different eyes When we get the healing done Oh when we get the healing done Oh we're living for the grace of the Lord Baby feel so good about it all Oh give thanks every day Till we get the healing done Oh till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Oh baby, baby till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Baby you got to stay Till we get the healing done If it takes to the break of day Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done Till we get the healing done You got to stay all night long Till we get the healing done Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, Oh my isn't this a real gem, utterly amazing. A fabulous and wonderfully brilliant piece from your pen. I love this one, it has such depth and such a wealth of wisdom. Just plain WOW. This is excellant, it truly is. Take care Mushy And for once I've got a day off.  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How wonderful. This poem of reflection shows the wonderful, honest heart that is you. I totally enjoyed the read. Thank you so very much. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From your pen, sir, flows deep honesty... well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ethome, thanks for the whine, picnic at my place. Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Would love to sip of the waters of your living loving stream ethome...this was captivating...making me remember things I let slip away...thank you sweet poet. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
E- fantastic! this was a different style, and i enjoyed reading it very much. it is a wonderful thing when we can reflect on things that have happened and the lessons in life we have gained. you are very wise, and very talented my friend. excellent poem. take care. ~amy~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
ethome, A living loving stream of thoughts and feelings you've shared here. Was a pleasure to read. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--there is much wisdom learned along the road, through the seasons, beside the living, loving stream...I like the way you wrote this, in form and content--excellent! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much to all.. I feel so complimented by many of your replies and I will endeavour to get back to all of you.. thank you so much once again...ethome |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ethome, Wonderful writing here. Take those lessons you have learned from life and use them to find your happiness my friend. You deserve it.  Beautifully written.LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much Lone Wolf I'd like to think that maybe I have learned from some of it.. thanks again...ethome |
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