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waltz of the candlelight |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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a single flame uninhibited as it burns how i long for the freedom of the fire to dance it's own dance to feel what it feels to be what it wishes to be... looking into the deep, rich colors- vivid shades of emotion- i become mesmerized... forever lost in the carefree waltz of the candlelight... ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Vicky~ I like it ! Just a flicker of sweet remembrance here. Glad you got inspired ! It's lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and you dance divinely my dear... and ya know a moth like me...loves the flicker of the flame ... very cool poem...cryptic, mystic and lovely well done girlie-girl  jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Very beautiful, keep that flame lit. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Vicky, I never thought of envying a flame, but you make a good case for it. I especially like the "vivid shades of emotion". To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Quite a compelling piece. Your sentence at the end causes me to wonder if we have a fictional piece here or not. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful reflections great work!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful reflections great work!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Vicky! Lovely! Denise |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Vicky..a beautiful image..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky~ this is fantastic......I love to watch the flame dance too.......  -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
flicker little light through season always shining memories in flame Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked It!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love candlelight, especially this time of the year, and this made me light several! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..i love this one  as you know, fire mesmerizes me! maybe i'll dust off my old flame poem and pin it up with yours... great write tricks! you paint a beautiful picture of the fire's dance.. hugs,g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I'll never look at a flame the same way again. Wonderful. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh it sure is cryptic!! hehe you got a flame for me vicky? seeing how you subtley used my first and last names in this poem. walt burns (wayoutwalt) |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful work, Vicky! |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Vicky... Ah, to be so free.... Best |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- well, thank you, my friend, but i can't really claim current inspiration... this is actually an oldie.. really glad you like it though. love and hugs to you.. Janet Marie- thanks so much for the kind words.. your wonderful replies always put a smile on my face.. hugs to you.. Daniel- always, my friend.. glad you enjoyed.. Marilyn- that's my favorite part too.. thanks so much for popping in.. glad you like it. VAS- thanks so much... glad you enjoyed it... ethome- really glad you enjoyed it.. thanks for reading. Denise- thank you.. glad you like it.. Poeminister- thanks.. glad you enjoyed.. Victoria- thanks so much for reading.. really glad you liked it. SEA- i could watch it for hours.. so happy you enjoyed.. karilea- thanks so much for the poetic reply.. i love it!! vandana- i appreciate your enthusiasm. glad you enjoyed it. Irish Rose- glad this made you light your candles.. i absolutely love them.. thanks so much. dg- thanks pal... please do pin yours up as well.. saving you a place next to this one.. glad you like it.. Passions Voice- thanks so much... glad you enjoyed. walt- well, i was hopin' you'd pick up on that, my friend...lol. got a special candle lit just for you.. thanks for the read...glad you enjoyed. Elizabeth- glad you liked it.. thanks a bunch! Best- you've got it!! glad you enjoyed.. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh YES! Vicky, perfect, I love this! to only have it's freedom! YES Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maree- thanks so much... really glad you enjoyed this.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
vicky......wonderful piece....love this candlelight waltz Charisma |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
There is something about candles, isn't there? A lovely poem With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- thanks so much, my friend... really glad you enjoyed.. dragonpoe- there certainly is...i just love them! thanks so much.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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