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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2000-11-26 08:39 PM


Loneliness

~~Daniel J D~~

It is relentless
Damned remorseless
Forever penetrating
Deeper and frustrating
Disengaging hearts
Not meant to be apart


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-11-26 08:44 PM


DJD~ Oh yes, I think so too......wonderful poem!   -SEA
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-11-26 08:49 PM


Danial,
Good writing, enjoyed.

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-11-26 08:50 PM


It leaves me aching
heart bleeding and breaking
The undeniable silence
for which there is no solace
Chills me to my core
clinging desperatly to the memory of before.

jm
*******
you write my heart tonite Daniel..
well expressed emotive piece ...
and your powerful words of wisdom both effect and insprire me.
thank you
take care
jm


Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-11-26 08:54 PM



Daniel-
  oh yes...you've described it perfectly,
  and i can certainly relate right now.
  my heart knows this these feelings
  all too well...
  wonderfully written, my friend..

  hugs,
  -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Daniel J D
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5 posted 2000-11-26 09:04 PM


SEA,
Thank you. It is cold and infiltrating.

Seymour,
Thank you, loneliness only knows one thing, it is called "destruction" of souls.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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6 posted 2000-11-26 09:21 PM


JD~
Great big *HUGS* !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
7 posted 2000-11-26 09:54 PM


Janet,
Your thoughts are so full of concerns, and they are very well appreciated. Thank you.

Vlraynes,
A reply worth taking note of, my arms are out stretched to you.

Marge,
They feel warm, thank you.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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