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Passionate Souls |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
It is a miserable life for passionate souls, Always waiting for something that may never come, Unsatisfied,never feeling whole, Sensitive to pain, yet also rendered numb. Intolerant to the daily grind, And vociferous in complaint, Not suffering fools, and often blind To acting with restraint. And although in life's vicissitudes, There is not much they will miss, They will also know the pulchritude, Of the highest states of bliss. For such heights they reach,that life seems tame, For those souls who burn with a quieter flame. < !signature--> 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot [This message has been edited by Tony Abbot (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TonyA~ I like this phrase very much - 'For such heights they reach,that life seems tame, For those souls who burn with a quieter flame.' How very vividly this speaks to me. Ah, yes ! Very nicely said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have you been peeking in my windows...  this is excellent...wisdom kissed words. very well worked vocabulary. many lines in this hit home for me... take care jm |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is too true. Truth seems to flow easily through your words. To be passionate can be a blessing and a cursing. I guess it all depends on how we handle ourselves. Thank you for another great read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
May I non poetically state you sure hit the nail on the head. But, this had the touch of a classic. A real keeper. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tony, Very very well written. "It is a miserable life for passionate souls, Always waiting for something that may never come Unsatisfied,never feeling whole, Sensitive to pain, yet also rendered numb". Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Thank you all for replying. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Words that passionate souls understand. This has such a personal feel to it... enjoyed this very much... -Tier |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Glad you enjoyed it,Tiersdin. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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