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On Heartache's Shore
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On Heartache's Shore |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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On Heartache's Shore ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes when your heart is aching it shatters not alone For somewhere out there another feels they are also breaking on their own So if two hearts be shattered scattered in the night They might just meet upon the shore of heartache tonight If one picks up a piece of yours found laying on heartbreak's shore And seeks you out to return it and softly knocks at your door Then you will know the piece you found laying next to yours in the sand Belongs to that person's heart yet you held it lovingly in your hand As you each exchange the pieces you found that you've been holding You just may find the perfect fit of new love is unfolding ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great setting Marge I love the metaphors and images therein ...wonderful work!! Just a beautiful poem!...ethome |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Ah,lovely poem..evocative and very touching,Marge. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is so goooood I love this one, you have penned this perfectly. Really excellant, and you have written a true beauty here. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"So if two hearts be shattered scattered in the night They might just meet upon the shore of heartache tonight" Beautifully penned Marge ... such a wonderful mood this has set. Just when heartache becomes insurmountable, we may just find this missing piece held lovingly by another ... oh so true. What a lovely vision you've shared!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, You have done it yet again, perfect, I just keep searching for you and your great words of wisdom. "As you each exchange the pieces you found that you've been holding You just may find the perfect fit of new love is unfolding" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bravo!!How true. You speak with such heart that I am sure that love will come knocking and together you will both put all the pieces of your hearts together. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I just love this......it reflects hope, beautifully -SEA |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful poetry Marge... enjoyed muchly. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes when your heart is aching it shatters not alone For somewhere out there another feels they are also breaking on their own ============== Belongs to that person's heart yet you held it lovingly in your hand As you each exchange the pieces you found that you've been holding You just may find the perfect fit of new love is unfolding ============ this is wonderful Margie...like a gift of poetic fate... this is exactly how it can happen... beautiful tender render from you dear romantic lady jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, here I am a'knocking Right at your front door. I found this little piece of heart That washed upon the shore. I knew that, when I found it, Because it was so large There was no doubt that it belonged To my good buddy MArge. They tell me down on Main Street You found a piece yourself And have it placed for all to see There on your kitchen shelf. So let's put them together And maybe we can start a Beautiful relationship.... Your ventricle - my aorta. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You write with the light of hope and love. This poem is a beautiful vision and message. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you so much for always replying so sweetly. TonyA~ I appreciate the read. Marsha~ I just giggle at your enthusiasm ... Love it ! Kit~ Lovely comments from you, my friend. I thank you. JD~ You are just wonderful, my friend. StarTime~ Thank you - S'cuse me, I have to answer the door.  SEA~ Hi gal ! I do always try to find the hope. Mike~ You make my night. JanetMarie~ It can happen just that way. You're a dear. Balladeer~ LOL ! YOU a-orta be ashamed of trying to get by with THAT rhyme ! You touch my ventricle - and I'm telling ! Well, after I get done smiling ! PoeMinister~ So pleased that you enjoyed the hope in it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- this is absolutely beautiful, my friend. just the thing to help bring me out of hiding this evening..lol. there is alot of truth in these words. i really like this... hugs to you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
It is on heartache's shore I dwell Alone in my own private hell... Sorry Marge thise words just popped into my head as I read this. I like the idea in your poem better though. It would be so nice to not be alone in heartbreak...this was gorgeous. W.B. I am a disturbed person, and I write about disturbed people. ~Tennessee Williams |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Oh, there just aren't words for how I felt reading this one. You have written of a new love so eloquently and beautifully. All I can say right now is that anything is possible. Wonderful writing, my friend. Your words always touch me. Love ya' LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, So very lovely, I am at a total loss for words, just shaking head with tears running down check, I miss you so very much and your poetry, just so glad to hear you heart as big and full of love as always, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge---What a wonderful thought you have penned here...you know, that Balladeer is right...you do have the biggest heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Tee-Hee! Love getting you out of hiding ! Thanks, gal. WitchesBrat~ Ahhhhhh ! I understand perfectly. Thank you for the sweet reply. LoneWolf~ Yes, dear lady - anything is possible ! So glad to touch your heart. Cerenity~ Hon, it is always good to see your replies. Check the Pub from time to time - and Spiritual too. I've been browsing a lot in the archives too. Martie~ Awwwwww ! Well, that Balladeer would know ! *wink* Love you, my sweet poet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You put hope back in my heart |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is beautiful Marge! I love it when you write like this, you put that little something special into your words. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie A beautiful, loving and very touching piece Loved it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, when I heard you were back, I hurried over to see what you wrote. Then I got so excited I forgot to post a reply. You gotta know how much I love this....Heaps and heaps...mountains even. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge....beautiful penned, its always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ Wonderful write from you Deb On heartaches shore where two broken souls meet, as lonesome souls sometimes do, each other's comforting woes they seek |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I'm pleased to know that. For with hope - comes a new chance. *Hugs* EagleOne~ I really do appreciate your thoughts. You make me feel good about my writing. Thank you. Tracie~ Thank you, my friend. *Hugs* to you too. Kethry~ Awwww ! Thank you so much. I like your mountain of appreciation ! Charisma~ I appreciate your replies so much. Thank you, my friend. BloomingRose~ Thank you for the verse. I appreciate the reply very much. Denise~ You're just a doll ! *Thanks to you all for the wonderful responses to this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, O Marge, This is such a magnificent piece of writing... I feel so much with your poetry.... regards O spirited friend, Sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* This is absolutely beautiful...such tender words woven into the story of love finding a way to live...the pieces of our broken hearts are waiting to be interlocked with another...so comforting your words are my friend~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I am so pleased to know that I touch you. Thank you, my friend. ButterfliesDC~ Yep ! That's the way it works, my friend. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
I'm still new here in the forum, but I have enjoyed your poems, especially this one. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, only you could take something like heartbreak and create such a beautiful story of budding love. Thank you for posting this, my friend. I enjoyed it a lot. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, dear PoetLady, how sweet this is to come across this eve... In truth, you bring smiles to me when I read such softly spoken words you put into rhyme... Your kind heart is a treasure PoetFriend... Thank you for this delightful read This is a keeper 4me Marge Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoozieQue~ Thank you so much. And a belated welcome to you. LoveBug~ My little friend, I thank you so much. Dani~ We can sure count on you to scour the basement and bring up a gem or two. Thank you, my friend for wanting to keep it. I gladly share with you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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