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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2000-11-26 05:36 PM


As You Are to Me
Virginia Salter

you whisper your presence
across the pages of my life
gently caress the sinew of my spirit
with words that becalm
and uplift

could that I
be so to you
in a day
in an hour
in a moment in time

you moisten
as with dew drops
the tears in my eyes
that spill out from joy overflowing
as a river in the ebb of its tide
giving life at land’s edge

would there be,
oh, could there be,
one element of me
that might impart
the tiniest of substance
a moment of glee
that would freshen
the heartbeat
that exists
within thee

would that I be
an iota of blessing
as you are to me


© November 26, 2000

© Copyright 2000 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-11-26 05:40 PM


Oh, I do love this and the feelings that come with it.....beautifully done   -SEA
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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2 posted 2000-11-26 05:57 PM


Thanks, SEA!  
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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3 posted 2000-11-26 06:05 PM


VAS,
This is lovely.  Nicely written.

Poeminister

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
4 posted 2000-11-26 07:36 PM


Thank you, too, Poeminister!  You're very kind.
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