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SEA
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0 posted 2000-11-26 05:27 PM




Surrounded by feelings I can't escape
Lost in your memory tonight
This isn't where I want to be
Yet I have no control; I cannot fight

You're here with me,
I swear it's real
All the love I feel for you
I am unable to conceal

You see through my soul
You've always had the ability
To create this want in me
With one look from you ~ it happens, automatically

I have no barriers
No way to disguise
Even in dreams
I can tell you no lies

So painful to see your handsome face
The ache of missing you, the sound of your voice
I'm lost in your memory tonight
I simply have no choice

~SEA~

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Marsha
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1 posted 2000-11-26 05:33 PM


Circe, this is utterly divine, this really is one of your absolute best. It took my breath away. Wonderful excellant write from you.
Take care
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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2 posted 2000-11-26 05:54 PM


SEA~
I like it when you wade in the memories.
Nice one, hon.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-11-26 06:31 PM


You see through my soul
You've always had the ability
To create this want in me
With one look from you ~ it happens, automatically
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no sense in even trying to fight it Sea-gator...
its like swiming against the tide...
beautiful,emotional,expressive, poem girlie..
and you already know...how well I relate
jm

There are moments ...
when I Love you
beyond the limits of my human heart ...

...you will always be mine.

Collin Raye


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4 posted 2000-11-26 08:33 PM


"I have no barriers
No way to disguise
Even in dreams
I can tell you no lies"

Beautiful SEA ... ahhhh, to be lost in those memories, wonderful and sentimental, just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2000-11-26 08:52 PM


Marsha~ You are too kind, thank you  

Marge~ thank you, I like it when you do too!  

Janet~ I know you know this too well, thank you so much  

Kit~Very lost.....thank you  

-SEA

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6 posted 2000-11-26 08:59 PM



SEA-
  
        'So painful to see your handsome face
  The ache of missing you, the sound of your voice
          I'm lost in your memory tonight
              I simply have no choice'


    boy...isn't it the truth though...
    i felt this one all the way through,
    my friend...those memories can be
    tough, but there's no sense in fighting
    them...they always win...

    hugs to you,
    -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



SEA
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7 posted 2000-11-26 11:51 PM


Vicky~   yep, they always win......no matter what you do.... thank you   -SEA
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8 posted 2000-11-27 12:00 PM


Oh how absolutely beautifully sad.

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

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9 posted 2000-11-27 12:01 PM


"This isn't where I want to be yet I have no control I cannot fight"...

Thank you sweetie for sharing such beauty in words once again...

Coco

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10 posted 2000-11-27 12:19 PM


SEA--You have a way with writing your feelings--a beautiful way. Nicely written.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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11 posted 2000-11-27 08:52 AM


AWC~ Thank you  

Coco~ thank you so much  

PM~ I'm happy you liked this  

-SEA


Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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12 posted 2000-11-27 09:30 AM


love this one Sea......you expressed your feelings so well......

((warm huge hug))

Charisma

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13 posted 2000-11-27 09:55 AM


Memories can be beautifully painful. This was done with great emotion and heart. Thank you so much for the read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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14 posted 2000-11-27 12:55 PM


Charisma~ thank you so much  

Startime~   Painful and definately beautiful all at once, yes. Thank you  

-SEA

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15 posted 2000-11-27 02:15 PM


Very nice...wonder how much time is spent in memories...hopefully your memories will be happy one's...James
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16 posted 2000-11-27 02:46 PM


ah yes, those memories painfull and sweet, they're always there! well done!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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17 posted 2000-11-27 03:36 PM


James and Eagle One~ thanks guys   -SEA
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18 posted 2000-11-27 07:01 PM


"I'm lost in your memory tonight"                                                          Ah, SEA, my friend,  we love, and we long, and we always remember...  your feelings here are an open book...wonderfully written.


jwesley

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19 posted 2000-11-27 07:05 PM


Circe, I'm going to give this to those OSCAR's tomorrow, but please don't expect a reply soon because they are a real shower. (You can tell I love them can't you!)
Take care
            Mushy
It is a wonderful poem love, and they will love it, they just won't rush to tell me about it.  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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20 posted 2000-11-27 10:38 PM


I think there are times when we just NEED the thrust of a memory thorn...makes us appreciate what we do have in our hands and hearts right now....love you sweetie

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



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21 posted 2000-11-27 11:07 PM


Very beautifully done, SEA!

Denise

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JWesley~ I'm afraid you are right, I am very much an open book when it comes to my feelings...... thank you  


Mushy~ tell the OSCAR's to take their time, I don't like to rush men.....

Paula~ yes, and there are times when we just can't stop the memories from coming, no matter how much we'd rather not face those feelings again...... thank you sweetie  

Denise~ it's wonderful to have you stop by and read, thank you  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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23 posted 2000-11-28 10:05 AM


The ache of the memory comes...and then
the tender comfort of knowing they are only
a dream away...and then waking up
alone...the double edged sword...Excellent
weave of heart and soul...I know many will
realate to your words of weave Sea~

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24 posted 2000-11-28 06:01 PM


LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Deep in the heart
25 posted 2000-11-28 06:40 PM


I have no barriers
No way to disguise
Even in dreams
I can tell you no lies
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Your words have no disguise either.  wonderful!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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26 posted 2000-11-28 06:48 PM


BDC~ thank you, I'm very lucky, I don't have to wake up alone, my husband is always there.....but even his love can't stop some memories  

Vandana~ thank you  

Interloper~ thanks, glad you're back  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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