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kaile
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0 posted 2000-11-26 12:59 PM


Reeling from
a glorious feeling
of accomplishment

It saddened me
to realise that
I would dare to lead
a more adventurous life
than in real life itself

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-26 01:32 PM


I think we are all a bit more daring in our dreams than we are in real life. Maybe once in awhile we should attempt some of those dreams and see what happens!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-11-26 01:48 PM


True indeed, tis dreams in which were so bold, if only we could carry this boldness into our real lives more often...wonderful write.

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kaile
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3 posted 2000-11-27 01:24 PM


thank you for understanding, denise and Poeminister...now i dont feel silly for having such thoughts anymore
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4 posted 2000-11-27 02:24 PM


And Who Is To Say
You Are But A Dream More Wise
Than The Adventuress One

kaile
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5 posted 2000-11-28 11:47 AM


short yet thought-provoking..i appreciate your response and will be thinking about it more
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6 posted 2000-11-28 11:51 AM


true, so true.......enjoyed this   -SEA
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7 posted 2000-11-28 11:51 AM


In dream comes the real
the real "me" is yet to be
in dreams I conquer


Karilea
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8 posted 2000-11-28 06:54 PM


dare to dream kaile. . .

and then, dare to make those dreams come true. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


kaile
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9 posted 2000-12-03 12:04 PM


glad you liked, SEA

thanx so much for your poetic response, sunshine...yes, dont we all feel braver when we are in our dreams?

splendid advice, Sven...believe me, im trying

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10 posted 2000-12-03 12:11 PM


You can always dream of things that seem more daring than your basic personality admits.. but the realization that they are there comes from nowhere else than the deep chanbers of your imagination....YOU created them from a mind that sought to think independently of yourself....and if you really wanted to do them you could change the sadness to adventure......I like how you layed this out .....take care...ethome
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11 posted 2000-12-03 01:42 PM


Kaile,
  But what would our lives be without dreams, I hope yours come true!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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12 posted 2001-12-05 07:15 PM


Don't be so gloomy, Kaile. Sometimes you just have to bring the excitement into your REAL life. No matter how boring your life would be, you just have to have a positive outlook and you might find that your life is every bit as adventurous as that of a rock-climber!  

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